Comment from patwannabe

Excellent

sixteezkid, you have written the story of life. Love and hate. I know that it was required, but I think you handled both well. Hate is wrong, and love makes our heart sing. We can go from one to the other fast, can't we. Well done, patwannabe

 Comment Written 27-Apr-2009

Comment from stormwolf2

Excellent

I love this little poem, so much said in just a few words...I like that!

It has a nice flow with good rhyming.

good luck with the contest.

Best wishes,
Malcolm

 Comment Written 27-Apr-2009

Comment from fictionwriter

Excellent

I love this poem. There is a connection between love and hate. There are people I thought I hated that I truly came to love, and just the opposite. I think this poem describes that. Great job.

 Comment Written 27-Apr-2009

Comment from cheyennewy

Excellent

Hi Sue...this is a good contest entry. You used the required words well especially
for such a short poem.
Well done
Good luck in the contest...
Blessings.....chey

 Comment Written 27-Apr-2009

Comment from wierdgrace

Excellent

Hey kid, so glad to see your name in this contest, this is wonderful, well written, and the way you used the words are perfect as always, enjoyed it and wish you lots of luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 27-Apr-2009

Comment from Pacinogal

Excellent

Hi sixteezkid, nice to meet you.

You did a super job on this post. You got all

the words in there and not one is strained. Great job!

Kindly, Kathy

 Comment Written 27-Apr-2009

Comment from mmichelle97219

Excellent

I really liked it, but it seems so unfinished. There needs to be line at least another four lines. Its good. I wish you the best of luck in the voting booth.
Michelle

 Comment Written 27-Apr-2009

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reply by the author on 27-Apr-2009

I didn't want to tell a long story; just a quick piece with feelings and a picture of the subject - and not elaborate. But thanks so much for your very kind review. Sue :-))

Comment from malachi1206

Excellent

Very short sweet to the point great format certainly used all your words good classic rhyme scheme overall an excellent poem malachi1206

 Comment Written 27-Apr-2009

Comment from Margaret Snowdon

Excellent

There's few words, but they
say it all. Short but sweet,
with excellent rhyme, and
complemented with a great picture.

Good luck with the contest, Sue.

Margaret.

 Comment Written 27-Apr-2009

Comment from adewpearl

Excellent

Well, are you not the clever one to incorporate all those words of the contest challenge and use barely any other words to tie them together? The meter and rhyme are excellent, the message is thoughtful, and I have nothing bad to say!!! Good luck in this contest. Brooke

 Comment Written 27-Apr-2009