Chasing the Elusive Dream
Viewing comments for Chapter 34 "Wedding Thrills and Spills"A southern couple's journey in the 60's,70's & 80'
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Comment from Deejharrington
I don't think a wedding has gone off that hasn't had it's hitches and glitches. But this one tops most of them! Your poor husband, I hope he's feeling better. I can't say I would have gone along with what your daughter-in-law and son did. Inviting 70 people and not telling you? Invite them early for a hike? I would have told them all to go take a hike. You are very understanding and loving person. Also a talented writer. I hope that's the last/only child to get married.
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2009
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I don't think a wedding has gone off that hasn't had it's hitches and glitches. But this one tops most of them! Your poor husband, I hope he's feeling better. I can't say I would have gone along with what your daughter-in-law and son did. Inviting 70 people and not telling you? Invite them early for a hike? I would have told them all to go take a hike. You are very understanding and loving person. Also a talented writer. I hope that's the last/only child to get married.
Comment Written 28-Apr-2009
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2009
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I did tell my son off but I didn't want to antagonize my new daughter-in-lad. Actually my son was the second to get married but two of my daughters are divorced and one has not married so I have three single daughters. They're on their own for the next wedding. Thank you for the review and your nice comments.
Beth
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I give you a lot of credit for just getting throught it! Good Luck
Comment from Joan E.
This is a terrific retelling of rather horrific events in a whimsical manner that works so well. Your started with "red alerts and pushing panic buttons," which said it all. The hubby "into hiding" episode, before he fell was hilarious. Thoroughly enjoying read at your family's expense. Hope the hip healed in a hurry after the honeymoon (sorry, couldn't resist).
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2009
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This is a terrific retelling of rather horrific events in a whimsical manner that works so well. Your started with "red alerts and pushing panic buttons," which said it all. The hubby "into hiding" episode, before he fell was hilarious. Thoroughly enjoying read at your family's expense. Hope the hip healed in a hurry after the honeymoon (sorry, couldn't resist).
Comment Written 28-Apr-2009
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2009
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Joan E.: Thank you for the review and the nice comments. He did heal fairly fast but the ironic thing which I didn't mention was that he had knee surgery three months before and had just gotten to the point where he wasn't limping. He had been practicing walking in his Tux without the limp.
Beth
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Thanks for the feedback--now, I am feeling sorry for him. -J
Comment from zydecosal
Oh, my goodness sake. What a shock to be told so many people were coming to dinner. You did a great job telling the story. No doubt your hubby wasn't one bit happy. But then, if he had stayed around to help you the accident wouldn't have happened. Terrific story.
Sally
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2009
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Oh, my goodness sake. What a shock to be told so many people were coming to dinner. You did a great job telling the story. No doubt your hubby wasn't one bit happy. But then, if he had stayed around to help you the accident wouldn't have happened. Terrific story.
Sally
Comment Written 26-Apr-2009
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2009
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Sally, Thank. It was a shock and I glad we're passed that. We can laugh about it now or least I can. I appreciate you reading and commenting.
Beth
Comment from AMORE AGENT
Hello,
I hope your well??
I really enjoyed reading this, well written, funny too. A family affair, that starts off well and ends up, all over the place. Ha ha funny stuff. Life has these classic stories. I like the title, I also like this bit, 911, in spite of being informed we needed only one ambulance, sent two police cars, an ambulance, and a fire truck, all with sirens blazing. This brought all the neighbors from several blocks out on the street to see what was happening.
Ciao for now! (:
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2009
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Hello,
I hope your well??
I really enjoyed reading this, well written, funny too. A family affair, that starts off well and ends up, all over the place. Ha ha funny stuff. Life has these classic stories. I like the title, I also like this bit, 911, in spite of being informed we needed only one ambulance, sent two police cars, an ambulance, and a fire truck, all with sirens blazing. This brought all the neighbors from several blocks out on the street to see what was happening.
Ciao for now! (:
Comment Written 26-Apr-2009
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2009
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Thank you for review. I appreciate the nice comments. It's that silly. It isn't the first time I've called 911 and gotten every emergency vehicle around. I guess they are bored and looking for some reason to respond.
Beth
Comment from Treesaw
Since I'm on vacation and can't get to my computer as often, I may have missed your reply to a question I asked. If these are true anecdotes from your life, they would be perfect in a book like the stuff Erma Bombeck wrote or the author of Please Don't Eat the Daisies (?) Anyway, your stuff is always a pleasure to read.
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2009
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Since I'm on vacation and can't get to my computer as often, I may have missed your reply to a question I asked. If these are true anecdotes from your life, they would be perfect in a book like the stuff Erma Bombeck wrote or the author of Please Don't Eat the Daisies (?) Anyway, your stuff is always a pleasure to read.
Comment Written 26-Apr-2009
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2009
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These are anecdotes from my life. I've thought about putting them together in something like you mention. THank you for the suggestion and for the review.
Beth
Comment from KYPollard/El Gato
Sounds like a wedding day from Hell. Glad you made it through. Thank you for sharing this wonderful memeory. It was my pleasure to read.
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2009
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Sounds like a wedding day from Hell. Glad you made it through. Thank you for sharing this wonderful memeory. It was my pleasure to read.
Comment Written 26-Apr-2009
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2009
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Thank you for reviewing and for your nice comments.
Beth
Comment from jojosug
Oh, your poor husband! Fancy missing out on the big day. It did sound funny though and parts made me laugh. Well written and a pleasure to read.
Jo
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2009
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Oh, your poor husband! Fancy missing out on the big day. It did sound funny though and parts made me laugh. Well written and a pleasure to read.
Jo
Comment Written 26-Apr-2009
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2009
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Thank you for the review and nice comments. I'm so glad you enjoyed reading it.
Beth
Comment from patwannabe
Beth, this is delightful. That is,everything except your husband breaking his hip.I can't imagine how you handled dinner for 65 people. I guess you did it because you had to. We do lots of things because we have to, don't we. I like your story. It held my interest all the way to the end. It was very well written, continuity, grammar and punct. I hope your husband is completely healed with no hang-ups. Have a good one, pat
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2009
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Beth, this is delightful. That is,everything except your husband breaking his hip.I can't imagine how you handled dinner for 65 people. I guess you did it because you had to. We do lots of things because we have to, don't we. I like your story. It held my interest all the way to the end. It was very well written, continuity, grammar and punct. I hope your husband is completely healed with no hang-ups. Have a good one, pat
Comment Written 25-Apr-2009
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2009
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Pat, this happened several years ago. My husband healed nicely. I'm so glad you like the story. Thank you for your review and nice comments.
Beth
Comment from DecrepitOldBag
Oh gods, Beth! You make your life seem like total chaos, with you drifting through it swinging between utter panic and utter calm - ever the wrong way round! This is an extremely entertaining essay and I thoroughly enjoyed reading it. I didn't notice any spag or typos either. Great writing.
Warmest wishes
Kat
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2009
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Oh gods, Beth! You make your life seem like total chaos, with you drifting through it swinging between utter panic and utter calm - ever the wrong way round! This is an extremely entertaining essay and I thoroughly enjoyed reading it. I didn't notice any spag or typos either. Great writing.
Warmest wishes
Kat
Comment Written 25-Apr-2009
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2009
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Kat, Thank you for the review and comments. There have been some chaotic episodes in my life. When I write about the time I fell down the stairs, you will better understand how my son came about all his falling episodes. He gets it natural with both parents clutzy.
It does give me material to write about without having to use my imagination.l
Beth
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Beth, both you and your husband might be clutzy (super word) and all manner of other things too, but what really shines through your writing more than anything else, is the love in your family. Warm wishes, Kat X
Comment from Jazh
Oh, I shouldn't laugh, but this is hysterical! You poor thing...and your poor husband! Your description of events is graphic. No wonder 911 sent all the back up - they were scared! lol The only suggestion I have to make is "Unorganized" - 'disorganised'. Just a personal preference. Cheers. :)
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2009
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Oh, I shouldn't laugh, but this is hysterical! You poor thing...and your poor husband! Your description of events is graphic. No wonder 911 sent all the back up - they were scared! lol The only suggestion I have to make is "Unorganized" - 'disorganised'. Just a personal preference. Cheers. :)
Comment Written 25-Apr-2009
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2009
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Thank you Jazh, It is funny in retrospect and I want you to laugh. I appreciate you comments and I will take your suggestion with the disorganized.
Beth
