CSP: A Collection of Poems
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Comment from chaswriter
Sue - My God, you are deep. The metaphors in this poem can mean many things. 'expose my fear as the fraud that it is'-that is thought-provoking. Very well done. Charlie
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2009
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Sue - My God, you are deep. The metaphors in this poem can mean many things. 'expose my fear as the fraud that it is'-that is thought-provoking. Very well done. Charlie
Comment Written 07-Apr-2009
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2009
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Hi Charlie, we gotta stay one sneaky step ahead of those pesky emotions that get in our way! HA! So glad you enjoyed this one and thanks for your lovely compliments and review. Sue :-)
Comment from amada
Your theme is very deep and I truly liked it because it's a great reflection in my own, "let it rain so they can fully grow," very introspective phrase.
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Your theme is very deep and I truly liked it because it's a great reflection in my own, "let it rain so they can fully grow," very introspective phrase.
Comment Written 07-Apr-2009
Comment from malachi1206
I am still reading and trying to get up the courage to write this style poem but as you describe it it seems to meet the criteria good write good luck in your contest malachi1206
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I am still reading and trying to get up the courage to write this style poem but as you describe it it seems to meet the criteria good write good luck in your contest malachi1206
Comment Written 07-Apr-2009
Comment from Diane Marie
Hi Sue
This is a terrific heartfelt poem. I know where you are coming from with this one.
Good luck in the competition!
Take Care
Diane
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Hi Sue
This is a terrific heartfelt poem. I know where you are coming from with this one.
Good luck in the competition!
Take Care
Diane
Comment Written 07-Apr-2009
Comment from Reverie
This is nothing short of amazing! I love the imagery and metaphor of strength as seeds that need to grow, and fear as a fraud. You did so much with a tight nonet structure and made it look easy. This is a great entry for the contest. I wish you the best of luck!
Dana
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This is nothing short of amazing! I love the imagery and metaphor of strength as seeds that need to grow, and fear as a fraud. You did so much with a tight nonet structure and made it look easy. This is a great entry for the contest. I wish you the best of luck!
Dana
Comment Written 07-Apr-2009
Comment from Fleedleflump
when stomach tightens, just to inflame
the raw dependancy of me
I swallow icicles, cold
and deep into my soul,
heart become a slave,
mind cowering,
the freeze is
all I
need
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when stomach tightens, just to inflame
the raw dependancy of me
I swallow icicles, cold
and deep into my soul,
heart become a slave,
mind cowering,
the freeze is
all I
need
Comment Written 07-Apr-2009
Comment from RapturedHeart
Wow, Sue, I think this is exceptional thought here. All I can say is - I hear ya! This one speaks to me on a very personal level. Wishing you all the best in the contest,
Heather
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Wow, Sue, I think this is exceptional thought here. All I can say is - I hear ya! This one speaks to me on a very personal level. Wishing you all the best in the contest,
Heather
Comment Written 07-Apr-2009
Comment from debskatz
Hey Sue,
I REALLY like this one! I was expecting to vote for Ray's but now I think it's gonna have to be yours. This is really profound & I don't know too many folks that would ask for the rain to give them strenght & realize fear is nothing.
Great Job!
smiles,
deb
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Hey Sue,
I REALLY like this one! I was expecting to vote for Ray's but now I think it's gonna have to be yours. This is really profound & I don't know too many folks that would ask for the rain to give them strenght & realize fear is nothing.
Great Job!
smiles,
deb
Comment Written 07-Apr-2009
Comment from dportwood
I like the way you compare the source of your strength to the sunshine and rain. Let the rain wash away your fear and the sunshine will nurture the seeds of your strenght and cause them to take deep root. Nicely done.
Duane
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I like the way you compare the source of your strength to the sunshine and rain. Let the rain wash away your fear and the sunshine will nurture the seeds of your strenght and cause them to take deep root. Nicely done.
Duane
Comment Written 07-Apr-2009
Comment from Susanne M. Psyris
Nice work with the first couple of lines setting up perfectly the close to this nonet. Good luck in the contest. Hugs and smiles, Susanne
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Nice work with the first couple of lines setting up perfectly the close to this nonet. Good luck in the contest. Hugs and smiles, Susanne
Comment Written 07-Apr-2009
