Comment from tammipratt

Excellent

An interesting analogy and I think it creates a great message. This is a very good write. Good luck in the competition.

 Comment Written 21-Mar-2009

Comment from Domino

Excellent

Morning, Sue
How profound you are.
No way do we talk naturally as we portray here. We've time to spruce things up (usually, LOL)and present them without the 'chaff'. Therefore not much notice can be taken sometimes. In real life, we're far more boring and see-through, due to spontanaety, and lack of time to look good.
Terrific write. Love, Ray xx

 Comment Written 21-Mar-2009

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reply by the author on 21-Mar-2009

Hi Ray! Yeah, in the real world this can be roughly translated as, "Well, I smell no bullshit in this corner." HA!! (as I sit here in my well-worn track suit and not dressed up an ounce)! Thanks for your great compliments on this one, Ray :-)) Sue

Comment from Wendyanne

Excellent

Hi sixteeskid. I enjoyed this very well written piece of poetry in tetractys style very much. I like the message that you have conveyed. Well done

 Comment Written 21-Mar-2009

Comment from Deejharrington

Excellent

I really needed a "6" here, for this is perfect. The whole presentation, the words hit just the right note and the picture was representational of the feelings in the poem. Wonderful work!

 Comment Written 21-Mar-2009

Comment from rama devi

Excellent

This is superb. I love the thought, the effective expressiveness and the marvelous artwork well presented with yellow color scheme. True to form and tastefully conceived and delivered, this has a good chance to place in contest.

Best of luck dear Sue.

Love, rd

 Comment Written 21-Mar-2009

Comment from glacierbabe

Excellent

Wow, Sue, you are getting this poetry thing down. This is very well done. It meets the parameters of the contest perfectly. I paints a clear picture of what trust is. It does transcend words. Very well done. Best of luck in the contest. Cheryl :)

 Comment Written 21-Mar-2009

Comment from allborn66

Excellent

Ok - the last line piqued my interest. It made me go back an really think about what was being said. I like this poem, it has a great flow.
Barbara

 Comment Written 21-Mar-2009

Comment from Annelisa

Excellent

This is a strong entry for the contest. I love the format you chose to present it. The artwork and color combination is perfect. Annelisa

 Comment Written 21-Mar-2009

Comment from jdrhye

Excellent

Read this little delight many times and it is very nicely written and each time I read it it I find a new meaning. I enjoyed very much, so simple and yet the message is huge.

 Comment Written 20-Mar-2009

Comment from MaureenC

Excellent

I do believe you must do well in the contest as it contains exactly what is asked for.
Discernment comes into trust and that is where the chaff is sifted.

Really well done.
Mauseyc

 Comment Written 20-Mar-2009