CSP: A Collection of Poems
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Comment from NightWriter
Bravo! Bravo! "Daydreaming" is such a beautiful ride. That's it exactly, as you travel vast distances to any place in your mind. Poem is perfectly written in prose, rhythm and rhyming. Well done.
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2009
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Bravo! Bravo! "Daydreaming" is such a beautiful ride. That's it exactly, as you travel vast distances to any place in your mind. Poem is perfectly written in prose, rhythm and rhyming. Well done.
Comment Written 13-Mar-2009
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2009
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NightWriter, thanks so much for your great review. So glad you enjoyed it! With regards, Sue
Comment from adewpearl
A vacation of the mind sounds like one nifty idea to me - I'll be making a stopover in a houseboat on Lake Powell and visiting my ancestral villages in Norway and then going on a safari in South Africa since Jada has me in the mood for that! :-) This is fun!!! Your excellent rhyming couplets have been a pleasure to read. Brooke
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2009
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A vacation of the mind sounds like one nifty idea to me - I'll be making a stopover in a houseboat on Lake Powell and visiting my ancestral villages in Norway and then going on a safari in South Africa since Jada has me in the mood for that! :-) This is fun!!! Your excellent rhyming couplets have been a pleasure to read. Brooke
Comment Written 13-Mar-2009
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2009
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Ahhhh! An African safari...yes! And I've always wanted to see the great fjords of Norway! On my next journey, I'll head east to Europe and maybe down to Africa! HA! Thanks for your lovely review. Sue :-))
Comment from c_lucas
A vivid imagination will always help to pass a boring day. This is a well written poem that makes for a very easy read. Good imagery and descriptive scheme.
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A vivid imagination will always help to pass a boring day. This is a well written poem that makes for a very easy read. Good imagery and descriptive scheme.
Comment Written 13-Mar-2009
Comment from MJMuraco
Sweet poem! I could feel the plane ride and the anticipation of going to these beautiful places. Great Imagery and then suddenly the reality sets in that it is all in your mind.
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2009
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Sweet poem! I could feel the plane ride and the anticipation of going to these beautiful places. Great Imagery and then suddenly the reality sets in that it is all in your mind.
Comment Written 13-Mar-2009
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2009
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Yes, once getting past all the airport drama and the plane is rolling, it sure feels good! Glad you enjoyed my little poem (and journey)! And thank you for your very kind review. Sue
Comment from amada
Oh yes, I agree with you, it's great to have a little fun and go to different places even in our mind. I think it's good to write in fun too.
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Oh yes, I agree with you, it's great to have a little fun and go to different places even in our mind. I think it's good to write in fun too.
Comment Written 13-Mar-2009
Comment from FredCollingwood
One of the best opening lines I've ever read. You've posted another first-rate poem, here. I think it's awesome.
Fred
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2009
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One of the best opening lines I've ever read. You've posted another first-rate poem, here. I think it's awesome.
Fred
Comment Written 13-Mar-2009
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2009
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Fred, what a great compliment about my opening lines!! So glad you liked this poem. When I was writing it, I sure enjoyed it. Thanks for your great review! Sue :-))
Comment from findingmyroom
Very cool! The cheapest, least aggravating type of vacation ever... You should go on virtualearth and check out the bird's eye view of some of your vaca spots, but in the meantime, nice job with the poem!
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2009
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Very cool! The cheapest, least aggravating type of vacation ever... You should go on virtualearth and check out the bird's eye view of some of your vaca spots, but in the meantime, nice job with the poem!
Comment Written 13-Mar-2009
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2009
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I LOVE VirtualEarth. It's fascinating! Thanks so much for your great review. Sue
Comment from Roisin
Ahhh! This is lovely Sue. A wonderful trip you've taken here, sustaining such wonderful meter through those long lines. You've done a great job. I love it.
Hugs
Roisin
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2009
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Ahhh! This is lovely Sue. A wonderful trip you've taken here, sustaining such wonderful meter through those long lines. You've done a great job. I love it.
Hugs
Roisin
Comment Written 13-Mar-2009
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2009
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Roisin, glad you liked it. Was just thinking about traveling and thought I'd write about it. Thanks very much for your great review! Sue
Comment from jshep
What would we do without our daydreams, Sue? This was a fanciful and fun journey you shared with your readers. Lovely flow and rhyme and cozy warm descriptions. Personally, I'll take Tuscany..... Your thoughts made me think of one hoping for the warmth of spring and winter to come soon. NO nits. Great job and fun poem. Joyce
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2009
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What would we do without our daydreams, Sue? This was a fanciful and fun journey you shared with your readers. Lovely flow and rhyme and cozy warm descriptions. Personally, I'll take Tuscany..... Your thoughts made me think of one hoping for the warmth of spring and winter to come soon. NO nits. Great job and fun poem. Joyce
Comment Written 13-Mar-2009
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2009
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Ahhhh! Tuscany. My next trip will be Europe. I do miss France and Italy so much! Thanks very much for your lovely review. Sue :-))
Comment from jeslaf
Aloft I am and heading to the mountains for a spree -- Sue, my head spends as much time in the coastal mountains of the NW as it does here in FL. I keep hearing the grass ain't greener and not to chase happiness, but damn, I can't help myself. This poem made me feel less alone in my daydreaming. :)
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2009
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Aloft I am and heading to the mountains for a spree -- Sue, my head spends as much time in the coastal mountains of the NW as it does here in FL. I keep hearing the grass ain't greener and not to chase happiness, but damn, I can't help myself. This poem made me feel less alone in my daydreaming. :)
Comment Written 13-Mar-2009
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2009
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Daydreaming is just another great creative outlet, isn't it?! I have been all over the U.S., but the one region I have not been to is the NW. Been wanting to go there for years, but just haven't. One day! Thanks so much for your lovely review. Sue :-))