Comment from RapturedHeart

Excellent

Ha, I really like this kind of fun, Sue. Creation AMAZES me!! The discovery of it has no end - and the fact that conditions in the universe are TEDIOUSLY and PERILOUSLY precise to sustain life is testament to a God who loves us, and brings the spring for us to enjoy:). Take care,
Heather

 Comment Written 10-Mar-2009

Comment from Tedisking

Excellent

With its wonder comes its sorry, With its joy comes its lamentation. As you, your self said "Apologies to all you folks in the Southern Hemisphere - It's our turn! :-)"
Ps. I am glad its becoming spring too (even if that means the people in the other hemispheres are upset)

 Comment Written 10-Mar-2009

Comment from Rdfrdmom2

Excellent

Sixteezkid,
if you lived in my area
you could have almost every season
within each week which is why I
spend hundreds of dollars a month
on sinus meds and the rest of my
neighbors have the flu, pneumonia,
etc. great poem, however

 Comment Written 10-Mar-2009

Comment from Sasha

Excellent

As I have said, probably too many times, I am new to poetry and totally unfamiliar with iambic pentameter. But I can speak to what I feel. This is a thought provoking poem that is also delightful and even a touch of humor. It is really very well written and brought a smile to my face.

 Comment Written 10-Mar-2009

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reply by the author on 10-Mar-2009

Smurphgirl, so glad it did bring a smile! And glad you enjoyed it. Thank you for your very kind compliments and review. With regards, Sue

Comment from honeytree

Excellent

What wonderful words written about "Universal Interest." Yes the tilt is very important but "Our Creator" designed the Solar system in "His Special Way." We have all learnt a lot about our earth. Many things are still a mystery and we won't know the real answer until we finally die. We may live again on earth in a different body and different time or else where if God wants us to.

The writer was very gentle with her words, caring words and thankful words, that many will read and enjoy.

Honeytree.

 Comment Written 10-Mar-2009

Comment from Domino

Excellent

Well, Sue, despite it not being a 'lesson', you taught me something. Are you sure, though, as I thought the Earth was flat! That's why I don't go out much cos I'm scared of falling off the end. ;-)
Perfectly rhymed and metered sonnet on an unusual and extremely interesdting topic.
You've displayed great intelligence, fun and poetic ability in this superior write.
Love, Ray xx

 Comment Written 10-Mar-2009

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reply by the author on 10-Mar-2009

Of course the earth is flat!! It's just tilted a bit. HA!! Thanks so much for your great compliments on this piece! My guru taught me a few things! :-))

reply by Domino on 10-Mar-2009

It's a bit like my brain I think, Sue. ;-)
Great poem, xx

Comment from Bryana

Excellent

This was so uplifting, it made
feel like spring is already here.

I did look in my backyard and
saw my plants green and ready to bud.

I love your poem, it was a pleasure
to read. I found no mistakes, nothing to change.

 Comment Written 10-Mar-2009

Comment from cheyennewy

Excellent

Hi Sue...the wind is blowing like mad here today so I needed a reason to believe in spring! This is a great poem and one I thoroughly enjoyed. Well done....blessings....chey

 Comment Written 10-Mar-2009

Comment from Arkine

Excellent

I'm actually starting to look forward to spring now, even though it means thunderstorms. I would love some color, everything is brown, not white. Great job on this poem, it is interesting to contemplate all the variables that allow life to flourish on this planet.

 Comment Written 10-Mar-2009

Comment from Annelisa

Excellent

Very enjoyable! This was fun to read despite not being a lesson in science ;) It is sunny and 77 here. I need to leave this computer and go play! Well done! Annelisa

 Comment Written 10-Mar-2009