CSP: A Collection of Poems
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Comment from mmichelle97219
There are some wounds that nevr heal
Some holes that will never be filled
A desire that will drive us to reach
For what we know we deserve
I thought this was a terrici poem. I liked it very much.
Happy Writing
Michelle
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There are some wounds that nevr heal
Some holes that will never be filled
A desire that will drive us to reach
For what we know we deserve
I thought this was a terrici poem. I liked it very much.
Happy Writing
Michelle
Comment Written 26-Feb-2009
Comment from yachtworknz
Sixteezkit-How great-
Born
With
A cry
Yearning for
Fulfillment of needs
That lives with us until we die
That is very nice and clear. Thanks for posting.
Now, Fibinachi, isn't that the 3/5 ration that every living plant, animal and life is based?
Cheers
Scott
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Sixteezkit-How great-
Born
With
A cry
Yearning for
Fulfillment of needs
That lives with us until we die
That is very nice and clear. Thanks for posting.
Now, Fibinachi, isn't that the 3/5 ration that every living plant, animal and life is based?
Cheers
Scott
Comment Written 26-Feb-2009
Comment from adewpearl
Is the zero line written in invisible ink? LOL I thought I got out of math considerations by being a poet! I shall have to try one of these - yours is lovely and profoundly philosophical - you continue with this philosophical streak.
Were you sitting out in your car when aliens zapped you with some deep-thinking ray a few nights ago??? :-) Brooke
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Is the zero line written in invisible ink? LOL I thought I got out of math considerations by being a poet! I shall have to try one of these - yours is lovely and profoundly philosophical - you continue with this philosophical streak.
Were you sitting out in your car when aliens zapped you with some deep-thinking ray a few nights ago??? :-) Brooke
Comment Written 26-Feb-2009
Comment from glacierbabe
The Fibonacci sequence had been used in movies and television shows. It is actually a very interesting thing. I loved the poem. It amazes me how you can use so few words to describe the very essense of our existance, survial. Another excellent work. :)
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The Fibonacci sequence had been used in movies and television shows. It is actually a very interesting thing. I loved the poem. It amazes me how you can use so few words to describe the very essense of our existance, survial. Another excellent work. :)
Comment Written 26-Feb-2009
Comment from Arkine
Very interesting poem derived from that. It's been a very long time since I remember hearing about him and more interesting is this poem from his sequence. Isn't it the truth we strive all our lives to obtain the things we desire. Do we achieve them all? I doubt anyone ever does. Great job on this! :)
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Very interesting poem derived from that. It's been a very long time since I remember hearing about him and more interesting is this poem from his sequence. Isn't it the truth we strive all our lives to obtain the things we desire. Do we achieve them all? I doubt anyone ever does. Great job on this! :)
Comment Written 26-Feb-2009
Comment from honeytree
Fulfillment within our lives can become the happy times, we can have to share with our loved ones during our lives.
We can have some down times, that we all have to overcome.
We wouldn't be human otherwise.
Great writing
Honeytree,
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Fulfillment within our lives can become the happy times, we can have to share with our loved ones during our lives.
We can have some down times, that we all have to overcome.
We wouldn't be human otherwise.
Great writing
Honeytree,
Comment Written 26-Feb-2009
Comment from AndStuff
Very good depiction of what humans go through. Easily read and understood. I like the picture that goes with it too, but I am a visual person, so that really helped. Good job.
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Very good depiction of what humans go through. Easily read and understood. I like the picture that goes with it too, but I am a visual person, so that really helped. Good job.
Comment Written 26-Feb-2009
Comment from RaymondJohn
Liked your explanation of the Fibonacci Sequence, though I didn't see the connection to the poem. It doesn't matter. It reads well, and I liked the unexpected rhyme. Good job. Ray.
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Liked your explanation of the Fibonacci Sequence, though I didn't see the connection to the poem. It doesn't matter. It reads well, and I liked the unexpected rhyme. Good job. Ray.
Comment Written 25-Feb-2009
Comment from Alexander E Poet
Very well written piece, not hard to follow. a very good write and a wonderful picture and words. very well done I love the form too, keep up the good work a There were no errors. No typo's and nothing to change as far as i can see. I look forward to your next one. Bully,bully for you.
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Very well written piece, not hard to follow. a very good write and a wonderful picture and words. very well done I love the form too, keep up the good work a There were no errors. No typo's and nothing to change as far as i can see. I look forward to your next one. Bully,bully for you.
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Comment Written 25-Feb-2009
Comment from rmdelta
Lordy, sue. I haven't a clue what this is about. I hope one of these days you don't give up on me, my friend. I try, but somehow, this kind of poem just never sink into my head.
Reggie
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2009
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Lordy, sue. I haven't a clue what this is about. I hope one of these days you don't give up on me, my friend. I try, but somehow, this kind of poem just never sink into my head.
Reggie
Comment Written 25-Feb-2009
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2009
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Reggie, we're just going to have to break up. Let's face it. You only come see me when you need money! I'm no longer going to buy into your "feeble mind" ploy! Now, go and kill off another sweet and innocent lady. :-)) Sue