CSP: A Collection of Poems
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Comment from duchessofdrumborg
'Transcended' is an intriguing piece of poetry. This writer has in my opinion, stated the obvious. The use of more finesse would I feel, have taken other important issues into consideration. God, Faith and Nature are surely higher on the list on mankind's existence than art. It was a pleasure to read and review this thought-provoking poem.
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'Transcended' is an intriguing piece of poetry. This writer has in my opinion, stated the obvious. The use of more finesse would I feel, have taken other important issues into consideration. God, Faith and Nature are surely higher on the list on mankind's existence than art. It was a pleasure to read and review this thought-provoking poem.
Comment Written 25-Feb-2009
Comment from earthlybeing
Interesting poem that has great flow and gives much to think about. The notes are also excellent and were very well written. Thanks, Jeanette
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Interesting poem that has great flow and gives much to think about. The notes are also excellent and were very well written. Thanks, Jeanette
Comment Written 25-Feb-2009
Comment from becky7777
you have it so right. everyone to each their own what is art. great tetracty, and think you have captured the essences of art. good luck in the contest.
Becky
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you have it so right. everyone to each their own what is art. great tetracty, and think you have captured the essences of art. good luck in the contest.
Becky
Comment Written 25-Feb-2009
Comment from minopavlic
The exceptional brilliance of your God given talent manifests itself with each stroke of your quill. If I had a 6 star left, it would be yours :}
Thank you for sharing
No_obstacle
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The exceptional brilliance of your God given talent manifests itself with each stroke of your quill. If I had a 6 star left, it would be yours :}
Thank you for sharing
No_obstacle
Comment Written 25-Feb-2009
Comment from MJMuraco
Sue, where do you learn so much. You know so much about history and I learn a lot from your author's notes. Your poem is great and the photo fits perfectly.
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2009
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Sue, where do you learn so much. You know so much about history and I learn a lot from your author's notes. Your poem is great and the photo fits perfectly.
Comment Written 24-Feb-2009
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2009
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Well, I've been as curious as a cat al my life. Can't stop feeding the ole brain! HA! Not a master of anything, but sure love to know a little about a lot. Makes life so full and fun. Am SO happy you enjoy the notes. There are interesting facts and history about anything. To learn just a tad about it is great! Thanks so much for your most generous review. With warmest regards, Sue
Comment from skye
Your short, structured poem truly says what is true....
definitions are manmade... the art tells where the artist has been.
I like the idea... the poem is so huge... encompasses the entire world.
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Your short, structured poem truly says what is true....
definitions are manmade... the art tells where the artist has been.
I like the idea... the poem is so huge... encompasses the entire world.
Comment Written 24-Feb-2009
Comment from Arkine
Very cool, I love art, written, drawn or constructed/sculpted. This poem really sums up what art is all about, making people think, making them wonder. New ideas are born that way. Great job! :)
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Very cool, I love art, written, drawn or constructed/sculpted. This poem really sums up what art is all about, making people think, making them wonder. New ideas are born that way. Great job! :)
Comment Written 24-Feb-2009
Comment from samandlancelot
I read this a few times to understand your message and this is what I see. We can portray human existence within the arts, but what makes art, art is an individual decision that cannot be defined by the whole of humankind.
Patricia
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2009
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I read this a few times to understand your message and this is what I see. We can portray human existence within the arts, but what makes art, art is an individual decision that cannot be defined by the whole of humankind.
Patricia
Comment Written 24-Feb-2009
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2009
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Bravo! Brilliantly said! Music, poetry, painting, sculpture, architecture, photography, films... and the list goes on. Thank you for your very, very close read and interpretation. And for your most generous review. Sue :-))
Comment from Joan E.
Thanks for attaching your notes and Leonardo da Vinci' s drawing to your tetracyts to establish the inspiration for your work. I'm always curious about the writer's muse, source or motivation--and who better than Leonardo? I liked your title for this perfect example of the form.
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Thanks for attaching your notes and Leonardo da Vinci' s drawing to your tetracyts to establish the inspiration for your work. I'm always curious about the writer's muse, source or motivation--and who better than Leonardo? I liked your title for this perfect example of the form.
Comment Written 24-Feb-2009
Comment from c_lucas
I disagree with the latter part of this well written poem. The human body is a form of art. Male, or female, the nude body brings a higher level to the world of art. It causes a higher dimension in the work of the artist.
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2009
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I disagree with the latter part of this well written poem. The human body is a form of art. Male, or female, the nude body brings a higher level to the world of art. It causes a higher dimension in the work of the artist.
Comment Written 24-Feb-2009
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2009
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There will never be a consensus by all of humankind to be able to agree and define art. Although we all appreciate "expression" of the arts, it is so subjective (that's my point). In other words, it's not "definitive". I agree with you about the human body as being a form of art. Every great artist is tested with drawing the anatomy of man. Thanks so much for your very generous review! Sue
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You're welcome, Sue. Charlie