CSP: A Collection of Poems
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Comment from Domino
Hmphhhhh!
I don't care as I'm not the jealous type, Sue.
Boo-hoo, baahhhhhhhh! Sob!!
I think this poem is complete rubbish, so there!
ROFLMAO, love, Ray. xx
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2009
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Hmphhhhh!
I don't care as I'm not the jealous type, Sue.
Boo-hoo, baahhhhhhhh! Sob!!
I think this poem is complete rubbish, so there!
ROFLMAO, love, Ray. xx
Comment Written 16-Feb-2009
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2009
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I wrote this to make you jealous!! So there! Take that! :-))
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It worked, but I still luv ya LOL! xx
ps - the poem was great really.
Comment from Roisin
A beautiful love poem straight from the heart. No hidden messages or deep meanings - you just say what you feel and it works beautifully. Great job.
Warm regards.
Roisin
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A beautiful love poem straight from the heart. No hidden messages or deep meanings - you just say what you feel and it works beautifully. Great job.
Warm regards.
Roisin
Comment Written 16-Feb-2009
Comment from Loyd C. Taylor, Sr
Good Monday morning poet friend, I have been away from my desk for a few days.
Sue, a wonderful and heart felt tribute to a good friend and I enjoyed. Loyd
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Good Monday morning poet friend, I have been away from my desk for a few days.
Sue, a wonderful and heart felt tribute to a good friend and I enjoyed. Loyd
Comment Written 16-Feb-2009
Comment from Minglement
Sue, this is very sweet and romantic, and lyrical, and all that good stuff that love and good poetry is made of! I hope it's reflective of where you are. You deserve the best! All good wishes -
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Sue, this is very sweet and romantic, and lyrical, and all that good stuff that love and good poetry is made of! I hope it's reflective of where you are. You deserve the best! All good wishes -
Comment Written 16-Feb-2009
Comment from NightWriter
"A New Valentine" is a beautifully written poem that reads so smooth from beginning to end. There is a nice rhythm and perfect rhyming here too. Well done.
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"A New Valentine" is a beautifully written poem that reads so smooth from beginning to end. There is a nice rhythm and perfect rhyming here too. Well done.
Comment Written 16-Feb-2009
Comment from Judian James
Ah, a new relationship is always so satisfying. I hope you and Mike enjoy each other for many months ... to come!
well done as a sweet Valentine verse
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Ah, a new relationship is always so satisfying. I hope you and Mike enjoy each other for many months ... to come!
well done as a sweet Valentine verse
Comment Written 16-Feb-2009
Comment from joan marie
This describes perfectly how I feel about the second date with my "super" bowl man. I can only hope. How did you know? It is uncanny that often on this site I chose to read just the words I haven't been able to speak. Great read. joan marie
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This describes perfectly how I feel about the second date with my "super" bowl man. I can only hope. How did you know? It is uncanny that often on this site I chose to read just the words I haven't been able to speak. Great read. joan marie
Comment Written 16-Feb-2009
Comment from jaeladarling
What a sweet, heartfelt poem. I can think of several friends I could dedicate this too, not just a sweetheart! :) Great technical merits, and beautiful emotion. Thank you for sharing this with us!
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What a sweet, heartfelt poem. I can think of several friends I could dedicate this too, not just a sweetheart! :) Great technical merits, and beautiful emotion. Thank you for sharing this with us!
Comment Written 16-Feb-2009
Comment from jdrhye
Its a touching poem but I have problems with the flow and meter. However, forgive me if this is one of those poems that requires one of the structures that I am not familiar with.
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reply by the author on 16-Feb-2009
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Its a touching poem but I have problems with the flow and meter. However, forgive me if this is one of those poems that requires one of the structures that I am not familiar with.
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Comment Written 16-Feb-2009
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2009
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I'm not quite sure where the difficulty is. Perhaps if you had another read, as every other reviewer has stated that the meter is excellent and unbroken. But, I appreciate your review. Regards, Sue
Comment from rhymelord
Lovely expression of affection and a nice lilt to the words. As always a pleasure to read, but I am afraid I have to pronounce "enjoyable" as "enjoible"
To pull the metre into shape. Sorry, Sue, but here I go again. Could you try "So enjoyable just to spend time". I await your reply with trepidation.
Regards
Reg
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2009
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Lovely expression of affection and a nice lilt to the words. As always a pleasure to read, but I am afraid I have to pronounce "enjoyable" as "enjoible"
To pull the metre into shape. Sorry, Sue, but here I go again. Could you try "So enjoyable just to spend time". I await your reply with trepidation.
Regards
Reg
Comment Written 16-Feb-2009
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2009
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It's gotta be that strange accent you blokes have down there! LOL!! Well, the only thing I can say is that it should be read like this: en-JOY-uh-ble - the 9 syllables there doesn't disrupt the rhythm (imho)....but have another read of it again with that pronunciation and let me know what you think. The "uh" part is very subtle. Can't put "so" in front of it because the other two stanzas begin with that (and that kinda bothers me a bit - may change it). Thanks so much for your most honest and kind review. Let me know what you think. Always appreciated, Sue :-))