CSP: A Collection of Poems
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Comment from Roisin
Hahaha! What a picture you've painted with your little story. Very well written and a nice touch of humour. I really enjoyed it. Good luck in the contest.
Warm regards.
Roisin
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2009
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Hahaha! What a picture you've painted with your little story. Very well written and a nice touch of humour. I really enjoyed it. Good luck in the contest.
Warm regards.
Roisin
Comment Written 12-Feb-2009
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2009
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Roisin, had to give a "short" write a try. When I saw the duct tape scenario, I had to give it a go. Glad you enjoyed it. Thanks for your very kind review. Sue
Comment from prodigal
Before I say anything I have to point out that is a great picture. HA HA. This is a funny little story and a good read. One question, did the duct tape hurt coming off?
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2009
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Before I say anything I have to point out that is a great picture. HA HA. This is a funny little story and a good read. One question, did the duct tape hurt coming off?
Comment Written 12-Feb-2009
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2009
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Male or female, who doesn't agree that Scarlett Johansson has a very nice set. HA!!! Hey, for my story, I wasn't going to use just any ordinary image. LOL!! Well, I did have a good time writing this because it sure brought back a fun memory. Could not believe someone came up with the idea for a contest to write about a great use for duct tape. (Let's just say I didn't do the "quick rip". That would have killed). Thanks so much for your review. Sue
Comment from rmdelta
Sue,
Well, now I've lived. What a treat to read this story. Oh, I would have loved to be in the ER had you been unfortunate enough to have been in a minor accident, but one which forced an x-ray to be taken. Imagine the surprise of the x-ray tech. when she took the picture. No, imagine your horror when you find out you have to have the picture taken. lol I can hear it now, "But, may I go to the ladies room first?" lol
It probably was bad enough for mom to tell you to make sure you had on clean underwear when you went out, because, "Lord forgive, what if you get in an accident." Sue, I really got a good laugh out of this one, my friend. Thanks for sharing.
reggie
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Sue,
Well, now I've lived. What a treat to read this story. Oh, I would have loved to be in the ER had you been unfortunate enough to have been in a minor accident, but one which forced an x-ray to be taken. Imagine the surprise of the x-ray tech. when she took the picture. No, imagine your horror when you find out you have to have the picture taken. lol I can hear it now, "But, may I go to the ladies room first?" lol
It probably was bad enough for mom to tell you to make sure you had on clean underwear when you went out, because, "Lord forgive, what if you get in an accident." Sue, I really got a good laugh out of this one, my friend. Thanks for sharing.
reggie
Comment Written 12-Feb-2009
Comment from yachtworknz
Great funny story.
Good photos choice.
Nice ending-
walked out of the house chuckling, knowing that not a soul would know that underneath this drop-dead satin gown was your every day common duct tape as a part of the ensemble.
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Great funny story.
Good photos choice.
Nice ending-
walked out of the house chuckling, knowing that not a soul would know that underneath this drop-dead satin gown was your every day common duct tape as a part of the ensemble.
Comment Written 12-Feb-2009
Comment from MJMuraco
Your story was humorous and entertaining. I loved the end where you talk about the elegant dress and knowing that you have duct tape underneath. I also experience this once, but I didn't think of the duct tape so I wore the dress without having the best cleavage. Great job.
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Your story was humorous and entertaining. I loved the end where you talk about the elegant dress and knowing that you have duct tape underneath. I also experience this once, but I didn't think of the duct tape so I wore the dress without having the best cleavage. Great job.
Comment Written 12-Feb-2009
Comment from Tellis
I bet it was fun getting the duct tape off later. Hope you didn't lose much skin. LoL This is well written and I enjoyed it.
Tellis
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I bet it was fun getting the duct tape off later. Hope you didn't lose much skin. LoL This is well written and I enjoyed it.
Tellis
Comment Written 12-Feb-2009
Comment from Hitcher
From the attached photo I'm thinking Scarlet Johansson, from the actually story I'm thinking your my kinda gal, Priceless! If you got EM you got to flaunt EM and I'm all for that, great story, Question! How painful was it when you had to release those puppies? Ha ha
I see we are branching out Sue, good on ya mate!
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2009
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From the attached photo I'm thinking Scarlet Johansson, from the actually story I'm thinking your my kinda gal, Priceless! If you got EM you got to flaunt EM and I'm all for that, great story, Question! How painful was it when you had to release those puppies? Ha ha
I see we are branching out Sue, good on ya mate!
Comment Written 12-Feb-2009
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2009
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Wow, have you got a keen eye! It is Scarlet. Hey, I wanted those puppies heaving! LOL!!!! Scarlett's aren't defying gravity on there own either. There's something in there propping those babies up! LOL!!! Painful? Well, let's just say they liked being "released"! HA!!!!! Yeah, I've always wanted to start very, very, very slowly into shorts. So this "duct tape" contest gave me the confidence to dip my toe in. Thanks so much for your great (and fun) review! :-)) Suc
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Consider your toe well and truly dipped, looking forward to the ankle! ha ha
Comment from Marjorie D.
I can see the whole shopping trip, the gown and the panic. I see this is in the non-fiction category. Did this really happen, Sue? Well, your solution was clever and so was your story. Good luck!
XO
Marjorie
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2009
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I can see the whole shopping trip, the gown and the panic. I see this is in the non-fiction category. Did this really happen, Sue? Well, your solution was clever and so was your story. Good luck!
XO
Marjorie
Comment Written 11-Feb-2009
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2009
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Yep, it sure did happen. I wasn't going to go out in that gown without my boobies being hoisted up!! LOL!!! So glad you liked my story. Thanks so much for the great review. So appreciated! Sue :-))
Comment from adewpearl
God, don't you just hate it when the silicone boobs start to fall. LOL One problem I've never had is lack of boobage, but I could still feel for this narrator. Taped up in duct tape beneath an elegant evening gown - this is funny shit!!! LOL
What a great entry in this contest. You are SO funny! Brooke
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2009
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God, don't you just hate it when the silicone boobs start to fall. LOL One problem I've never had is lack of boobage, but I could still feel for this narrator. Taped up in duct tape beneath an elegant evening gown - this is funny shit!!! LOL
What a great entry in this contest. You are SO funny! Brooke
Comment Written 11-Feb-2009
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2009
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Well, I had the boobs, but I wanted those puppies hoisted up high!! LOL!! Yeah, it's a scream that nobody knew how I was really put together under there! HA!!!! LMAO!!! So glad you got a kick out of this one, Brooke. Thanks so much for your great review! Sue :-))
Comment from Domino
Hi, Sue
As it's SHORT prose, and as it's you, I'll take a peek, LOL
What a performance ta look good. Couldn't you just wear a sling round ya neck and pop ya boobs in it? (you could use the 'black satin ribbon' off the card. ;-)
Great fun and well written, and I bet the ladies (well, those with little-uns) had a real laugh at your escapades.
Love, ray xx
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2009
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Hi, Sue
As it's SHORT prose, and as it's you, I'll take a peek, LOL
What a performance ta look good. Couldn't you just wear a sling round ya neck and pop ya boobs in it? (you could use the 'black satin ribbon' off the card. ;-)
Great fun and well written, and I bet the ladies (well, those with little-uns) had a real laugh at your escapades.
Love, ray xx
Comment Written 11-Feb-2009
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2009
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What a performance, indeed! The sticky duct tape was worth it all. The cleavage made the gown and not the other way around! LOL!!! My first try at a real, real short. I couldn't resist the contest of "duct tape". So, I went for it. Thanks so much for reviewing this piece, Ray. Howz things with you??? :-))
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Hi, Sue. I got man-flu ;-) and just got up in middle of the night(it's 4 am here) for a hot toddy. Just checked in for half hour and goin back ta bed.
Ray xx
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Awww....poor baby. Get better soon!!!
xx Sue