CSP: A Collection of Poems
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Comment from fictionwriter
The thought captured so well in this poem. I know a girl who was a victim, and she still suffers from the after effects. Well written.
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2009
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The thought captured so well in this poem. I know a girl who was a victim, and she still suffers from the after effects. Well written.
Comment Written 03-Feb-2009
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2009
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Yes, nobody can walk away with it without life being completely altered. Thank you for your kind review and comments. Always appreciated, Sue
Comment from MJMuraco
Your poem is very emotional from the artwork to your words. It flowed perfectly with a lot of emotion. I am sorry that your family member was violated. That is the worse thing that can happen to a person.
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Your poem is very emotional from the artwork to your words. It flowed perfectly with a lot of emotion. I am sorry that your family member was violated. That is the worse thing that can happen to a person.
Comment Written 03-Feb-2009
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2009
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Yes, all the pieces can never be picked up again. Many dreams lost. Thank you very much for your review and kind remarks. Yours, Sue
Comment from amada
A sad and powerful issue, this one, the victimizing of women. You express it very well and your selection of the art work is precious as well.
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2009
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A sad and powerful issue, this one, the victimizing of women. You express it very well and your selection of the art work is precious as well.
Comment Written 03-Feb-2009
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2009
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amada, we all know it is around. It just begs the question; WHY? We will never know. Thank you for your very kind review. Always appreciated, Sue
Comment from NadineM
Your poem is powerfully written. This seems to be about a sexual assault, but that isn't clearly stated. Not that it is necessary, but it could be a non-sexual assault as well.
The colors and accompanying pic made the presentation perfect.
Thanks for sharing this with me.
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2009
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Your poem is powerfully written. This seems to be about a sexual assault, but that isn't clearly stated. Not that it is necessary, but it could be a non-sexual assault as well.
The colors and accompanying pic made the presentation perfect.
Thanks for sharing this with me.
Comment Written 03-Feb-2009
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2009
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Nadine, I appreciate your reading and your great review. With regards, Sue
Comment from Roisin
Hi Sue,
Firstly, I'm so sorry that this has happened to somebody close to you - it must have been just terrible. Secondly, your poem is wonderful. The words are very powerful and full of emotion. Now you didn't say that it was a rictameter but I'm assuming it is. If so, am I right in thinking that line 6:
Traumatized and paralyzed
has seven syllables rather than eight? It could be an accent thing or I could be just plain wrong, but I just thought I'd point it out in case. Regardless of that anyway, it's a great poem with a beautiful but sad presentation.
Warm regards.
Roisin
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2009
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Hi Sue,
Firstly, I'm so sorry that this has happened to somebody close to you - it must have been just terrible. Secondly, your poem is wonderful. The words are very powerful and full of emotion. Now you didn't say that it was a rictameter but I'm assuming it is. If so, am I right in thinking that line 6:
Traumatized and paralyzed
has seven syllables rather than eight? It could be an accent thing or I could be just plain wrong, but I just thought I'd point it out in case. Regardless of that anyway, it's a great poem with a beautiful but sad presentation.
Warm regards.
Roisin
Comment Written 03-Feb-2009
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2009
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Yeah, it's your Irish accent again!.....Ha! Just joking! Thanks so much for catching that. I like the change better, also. Whew...a close one. Thanks for your very kind review and help :-)) Sue
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You're very welcome. I like that change too - seems to really get into the reader's soul. Great job.
Warm regards.
Roisin
Comment from Judian James
This is the fourth really sad piece in a row this morning.
Where's Margaret when I need her? Well done and I'm so sorry to hear that this happened to someone you know and care about. I will never understand this as long as I live
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2009
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This is the fourth really sad piece in a row this morning.
Where's Margaret when I need her? Well done and I'm so sorry to hear that this happened to someone you know and care about. I will never understand this as long as I live
Comment Written 03-Feb-2009
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2009
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There is no way to get one's head around it. The ripple effect is devastating. Thanks for your review, Jude. (maybe I'll write something happy today!) Sue
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Right after I said "where's Margaret" she posted something!! We had a good laugh over it. Do you ever review Margaret Snowdon?
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Isn't she such a sweet person? Been reviewing her work in "Nature's Glory" lately. The one about the Moon was very special.
So, you had a good laugh... (just what you needed!). Great timing. Do you two rescue each other? Ha!
Comment from EdwardVal
Another well crafted piece my friend, well within the bounds of the rules. I wrote a Rictameter last night myself that i'll be posting on here later. I found nothing wrong with this piece, Take care and hope to see more soon
E'Val
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Another well crafted piece my friend, well within the bounds of the rules. I wrote a Rictameter last night myself that i'll be posting on here later. I found nothing wrong with this piece, Take care and hope to see more soon
E'Val
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Comment Written 03-Feb-2009
Comment from Margaret Snowdon
A clever use of words that
speak volumes - so very sad,
complemented by an apt and
amazing picture.
Regards,
Margaret.
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2009
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A clever use of words that
speak volumes - so very sad,
complemented by an apt and
amazing picture.
Regards,
Margaret.
Comment Written 03-Feb-2009
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2009
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Margaret, thank you for your great review. It is a great image, isn't it? Always appreciated, Sue
Comment from Loyd C. Taylor, Sr
Good morning Poet Sue. I think we all know soemone are are that someone that something like this has happened to. It's a sad story but wonderful post. LOyd
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Good morning Poet Sue. I think we all know soemone are are that someone that something like this has happened to. It's a sad story but wonderful post. LOyd
Comment Written 03-Feb-2009
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2009
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Loyd, what an honor for you to give this work your highest review. It means more than you know. From my heart...Sue
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You deserve it Sue and are welcome. Loyd
Comment from rmdelta
Yeah! You're talking my language now, my friend. I've grown old in this life and saddened by the failure of our judicial system to punish these creeps. Very soon now, I'm gonna be a big-time supporter of vigilante justice, I'm afraid. Of course, reading what I write, you've already realized that. lol
Reggie
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2009
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Yeah! You're talking my language now, my friend. I've grown old in this life and saddened by the failure of our judicial system to punish these creeps. Very soon now, I'm gonna be a big-time supporter of vigilante justice, I'm afraid. Of course, reading what I write, you've already realized that. lol
Reggie
Comment Written 03-Feb-2009
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2009
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Reggie, I can only say that it is a good thing that this person lives overseas. As, I am certain I would be in prison right now. The ripple effect is so devastating that it can drive a completely normal, sane, loving person to rage. All I could envision for so long was me, personally, blowing their brains out. Now THAT is a horrible place for one's mind to go. I know you've seen the dregs of life in your profession. My hat's off to everyone in that field. Our society has deemed it okay to let the freaks walk amongst the innocent, while the judge knows with 90% certainty he will re-offend. I say, storm the Bastille! Thanks for your review, Reg. Always appreciated, Sue