CSP: A Collection of Poems
Viewing comments for Chapter 80 "The Arnolfini Portrait"A collection of poetry
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Comment from jshep
Loved the painting and information you have given the reader in the poem, Sue. Your descriptions and conclusions were very interesting, as well as the details you point out -the dog, the brush, the rosary, as well as the obvious full bloom. The rhyme and flow were excellent. A lovely read and presentation. Good luck. Joyce
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2009
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Loved the painting and information you have given the reader in the poem, Sue. Your descriptions and conclusions were very interesting, as well as the details you point out -the dog, the brush, the rosary, as well as the obvious full bloom. The rhyme and flow were excellent. A lovely read and presentation. Good luck. Joyce
Comment Written 27-Jan-2009
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2009
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"The Obvious Full Bloom"...now THAT is put so well! HA! So glad you found the words informative. I really loved this contest, because I love art so much. Thank you for your very generous review and compliments. With regards, Sue
Comment from Judian James
I love this painting and have viewed it on more than one occasion in my life. Your poem in honor of it is intelligent and informative. Well done Sue
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I love this painting and have viewed it on more than one occasion in my life. Your poem in honor of it is intelligent and informative. Well done Sue
Comment Written 27-Jan-2009
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2009
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Jude, so glad you have been to see this painting. And more than once! Thank you for your compliments and generous review. With regards, Sue
Comment from Domino
Hi, Sue
This is indeed a beautifully stunning picture. I know little of art but recall a discussion on this where a view was expressed that the bride had died an this was her ghost? (somethin ta do with the mirror's reflection. Mind you, these 'experts' talk a lotta crap sometimes, and IMHO see much which isn't inferred.
Terrific write full of interest an info.
Best wishes, Ray xx
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2009
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Hi, Sue
This is indeed a beautifully stunning picture. I know little of art but recall a discussion on this where a view was expressed that the bride had died an this was her ghost? (somethin ta do with the mirror's reflection. Mind you, these 'experts' talk a lotta crap sometimes, and IMHO see much which isn't inferred.
Terrific write full of interest an info.
Best wishes, Ray xx
Comment Written 27-Jan-2009
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2009
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Ray, they are STILL studying and talking about this painting! HA!! The experts do presume too much at times, yes. But, overall, they do have the provenance all the way back to when it was painting. That is amazing! Thanks so much for your review. As always... a big smiley for you! :-))) Sue
Comment from NightWriter
"The Arnolfini Portrait" is a beautifully written poem describing the painting of the merchant and his wife on their wedding day. I thought the dog was a cat, but the rest of the picture was very clear. Well done!
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"The Arnolfini Portrait" is a beautifully written poem describing the painting of the merchant and his wife on their wedding day. I thought the dog was a cat, but the rest of the picture was very clear. Well done!
Comment Written 27-Jan-2009
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2009
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It is as small as a cat! HA! Thanks very much for your very generous review and compliments. With regards, Sue
Comment from Susanne M. Psyris
A perfectly lovely entry into the contest...thanks for your contribution of this fine work. Good luck in the contest! Hugs and smiles, Susanne
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2009
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A perfectly lovely entry into the contest...thanks for your contribution of this fine work. Good luck in the contest! Hugs and smiles, Susanne
Comment Written 26-Jan-2009
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2009
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Susanne, so happy you enjoyed this piece. I could not pass up this contest, as I do love paintings so much. But this one has such a great story behind it. Thanks very much for your lovely review and compliments! Sue
Comment from jeslaf
Wow, this is very well written. I learned a few things (tabard and about the mirror in the painting--I'd have missed it for sure). Your appreciation for the piece shines through, and the form you chose has an old-fashioned feel to it that matches the age of the image. Bravo, poet! :)
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2009
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Wow, this is very well written. I learned a few things (tabard and about the mirror in the painting--I'd have missed it for sure). Your appreciation for the piece shines through, and the form you chose has an old-fashioned feel to it that matches the age of the image. Bravo, poet! :)
Comment Written 26-Jan-2009
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2009
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I'm overjoyed with your review. It was a task to ensure that the reader would at least learn something from the work. I do, indeed, love this painting. Thank you so much for your lovely compliments and review. So appreciated :-)) Sue
Comment from wvwriter
Wow...love the couplets and the education I got regarding the painting from your words. You are either very knowledgeable about art or have done your research well...whichever way, I'm impressed!
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reply by the author on 26-Jan-2009
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Wow...love the couplets and the education I got regarding the painting from your words. You are either very knowledgeable about art or have done your research well...whichever way, I'm impressed!
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Comment Written 26-Jan-2009
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2009
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Oh! I am jumping with glee! For someone to learn about a piece of art from my poem is wonderful! I was hoping that I could do it justice. I do love art and know this painting well. When I saw it in London, I couldn't take my eyes from it. Of course, did a bit of homework before writing this so I wouldn't be in err. Thank you so much for your lovely review. So glad you liked it. Regards, Sue
Comment from Roisin
Sue, this is beautiful. I've read it now a few times, so that I could give you an honest review, but seriously, it's great. Your rhymes are great, as is the rhythm. The only thing I think slightly throws off the rhythm is line 2. I think you could consider taking out the name, as it's already in the title, and adding to the line to enhance the rhythm. However, it's just an opinion, and whether you change it or not, it's a great poem.
Warm regards.
Roisin
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reply by the author on 26-Jan-2009
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Sue, this is beautiful. I've read it now a few times, so that I could give you an honest review, but seriously, it's great. Your rhymes are great, as is the rhythm. The only thing I think slightly throws off the rhythm is line 2. I think you could consider taking out the name, as it's already in the title, and adding to the line to enhance the rhythm. However, it's just an opinion, and whether you change it or not, it's a great poem.
Warm regards.
Roisin
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Comment Written 26-Jan-2009
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2009
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Thank you so much for your suggestion! You were absolutely right and I found something even better to replace it. Mentioning that it was "Netherlandish", as it is in the art world. Thank you!! And for your very generous review. With warm regards, Sue