CSP: A Collection of Poems
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Comment from joan marie
The haves and the have nots living side by side. I fear America is heading in this direction. Must have been a fascinating country to visit. joan marie
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The haves and the have nots living side by side. I fear America is heading in this direction. Must have been a fascinating country to visit. joan marie
Comment Written 14-Jan-2009
Comment from Minglement
You give a poignant message here in this telling poem. Sadly, I think what you express is so often true. Thanks for sharing this perspective. Good luck.
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You give a poignant message here in this telling poem. Sadly, I think what you express is so often true. Thanks for sharing this perspective. Good luck.
Comment Written 14-Jan-2009
Comment from Algernon
You did nee get the deli belly. The Nile is ok, but do nip down the Rhine for real beauty.
Did you not get naffed off with them trying to stuffed camels and stuff and steal your money. And you can nee go near the pyramids. Indeed it is Oxymoron. As is the beautiful Island of Cuba.
When I was in Morocco the Yanks wanted everything to be like America. They could not understand that the rest of the world does not worship fast food and has a culture.
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You did nee get the deli belly. The Nile is ok, but do nip down the Rhine for real beauty.
Did you not get naffed off with them trying to stuffed camels and stuff and steal your money. And you can nee go near the pyramids. Indeed it is Oxymoron. As is the beautiful Island of Cuba.
When I was in Morocco the Yanks wanted everything to be like America. They could not understand that the rest of the world does not worship fast food and has a culture.
Comment Written 14-Jan-2009
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2009
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You're a bloody whinging POM! Stop it! Stop yank-bashing. It's getting old!
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But that's our job. Until America comes home....
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LMAO!!! When I come over there, I'm gonna give you a big American Kiss right on the smacker!
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Blimey, does smacker mean the same as it does here. i'll not sleep now..lol
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I'll leave it to your imagination! LOL!!
Comment from janiesgotagun
Nice work. You really used the poem wisely to send a distinct message. It's not easy to get such a message across in a simple short way. You mastered that.
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Nice work. You really used the poem wisely to send a distinct message. It's not easy to get such a message across in a simple short way. You mastered that.
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Comment from Nightwind1
Unfortunately, poverty seems to exist in all of the most beautiful places we all travel in awe to. The mask it behind the happy facades away from the norman tourist's eyes. Good luck in the contest.
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Unfortunately, poverty seems to exist in all of the most beautiful places we all travel in awe to. The mask it behind the happy facades away from the norman tourist's eyes. Good luck in the contest.
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Comment Written 14-Jan-2009