CSP: A Collection of Poems
Viewing comments for Chapter 99 "Just Bitchin'"A collection of poetry
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Comment from Minglement
I can't disagree with any of this glorious rant! Somebody had to say it you did - eloquently! As the grandmother of a disabled child especially, I agree what a shame it is, where they decide to cut! It's shameful! You tell 'em!
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I can't disagree with any of this glorious rant! Somebody had to say it you did - eloquently! As the grandmother of a disabled child especially, I agree what a shame it is, where they decide to cut! It's shameful! You tell 'em!
Comment Written 13-Jan-2009
Comment from Hitcher
I think if I were you Sue I'd be wanting heads to roll my friend, it is always the ones who need help the most who end up getting shafted because they seem to be the easiest to brush under the carpet. I love the way you let vent, very impressive!
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I think if I were you Sue I'd be wanting heads to roll my friend, it is always the ones who need help the most who end up getting shafted because they seem to be the easiest to brush under the carpet. I love the way you let vent, very impressive!
Comment Written 13-Jan-2009
Comment from Dreamdancer
Hello my friend,
We can let a guy walk around free that stole 50 billion dollars but we cannot help kids. We take away from the schools and such but there is so much pork in the government... Now you have got my hackles up.... Awesome write my friend.... Dreamdancer
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Hello my friend,
We can let a guy walk around free that stole 50 billion dollars but we cannot help kids. We take away from the schools and such but there is so much pork in the government... Now you have got my hackles up.... Awesome write my friend.... Dreamdancer
Comment Written 13-Jan-2009
Comment from adewpearl
What great political/social satire told with wonderful rhymes!
The structure of your poem is as impressive as the insightfulness of the indictment of many current wrongs. Great work!!
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What great political/social satire told with wonderful rhymes!
The structure of your poem is as impressive as the insightfulness of the indictment of many current wrongs. Great work!!
Comment Written 13-Jan-2009
Comment from PatriciaLiteHickman
I couldn't agree more with this; sorry to hear about your daughter; what a rotten area to choose to cut;
liked this:
"Where is Congress?
Think us fools
You've no rules
Ambiguous
On hiatus!"
Well done, keep writing!
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I couldn't agree more with this; sorry to hear about your daughter; what a rotten area to choose to cut;
liked this:
"Where is Congress?
Think us fools
You've no rules
Ambiguous
On hiatus!"
Well done, keep writing!
Comment Written 13-Jan-2009
Comment from Jazh
I totally agree with your sentiments in this poem. It is the same in my country. The only comment I have is that some of the acronyms were foreign to me, and probably others. Could you maybe include a key in your Author Notes? Cheers. :)
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I totally agree with your sentiments in this poem. It is the same in my country. The only comment I have is that some of the acronyms were foreign to me, and probably others. Could you maybe include a key in your Author Notes? Cheers. :)
Comment Written 13-Jan-2009
Comment from Counting Carrots
EXCELLENT! Hits right home for anyone the world over these days. I've seen some good poems detailing the current global economic crisis but this is by far the best. Although I'm not American, i still sympathise with your woes! Things aren't too great this side of the pond either!
:)
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EXCELLENT! Hits right home for anyone the world over these days. I've seen some good poems detailing the current global economic crisis but this is by far the best. Although I'm not American, i still sympathise with your woes! Things aren't too great this side of the pond either!
:)
Comment Written 13-Jan-2009
Comment from rmdelta
sue,
I really appreciate your wonderful rant. Congress is full of *(^*&. You can't trust them to do %$@# $#@^# and that's a &^$% fact. Great story.
Reggie
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2009
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sue,
I really appreciate your wonderful rant. Congress is full of *(^*&. You can't trust them to do %$@# $#@^# and that's a &^$% fact. Great story.
Reggie
Comment Written 13-Jan-2009
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2009
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Had to have my #%#(%$ rant or I was going @%$#*#* blow up today!! Thanks for reading! :-)) Sue
Comment from P1
hey sue you told it very well
same everywhere ... here in ireland
we are going through a major recession
and it's the little people who are taking
the hits...the politicians are still flying
here and there and living the life. well
thought out and written. hugs lynda.
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hey sue you told it very well
same everywhere ... here in ireland
we are going through a major recession
and it's the little people who are taking
the hits...the politicians are still flying
here and there and living the life. well
thought out and written. hugs lynda.
Comment Written 13-Jan-2009
Comment from joan marie
I totally agree. When I heard about the 4 billion dollars spent on the campaign to switch from analog tv to digital I went nuts. In Jacksonville, I worked to help elect a mayor who actually did what he campaigned. Don't think I can think of another since. Good read. joan marie
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I totally agree. When I heard about the 4 billion dollars spent on the campaign to switch from analog tv to digital I went nuts. In Jacksonville, I worked to help elect a mayor who actually did what he campaigned. Don't think I can think of another since. Good read. joan marie
Comment Written 13-Jan-2009