CSP: A Collection of Poems
Viewing comments for Chapter 107 "Analyze This"A collection of poetry
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Comment from fictionwriter
I really liked this poem. Some people are just curious about everything, and I think you put that acroos quite well. I'm not a poet and cannot therefore say anything about how the poem is put together, but as a reader I liked it. Great job.
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2009
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I really liked this poem. Some people are just curious about everything, and I think you put that acroos quite well. I'm not a poet and cannot therefore say anything about how the poem is put together, but as a reader I liked it. Great job.
Comment Written 09-Jan-2009
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2009
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Well, I've only just started to write a couple of months ago. Had NO idea I could do it. (secretly, my next big hurdle is the ....dare I say it?......Short Story! Yikes...hope I didn't jinx myself. I have always love a great American Short Story. If I could do that, then I will have lived a large life. Thank you so much for your great review and compliments! Sue
Comment from LadyBrendragon
Very nice tone and flow to this. I like the idea of questioning ones own analysis of life, so to speak. I think most of us analyze in some form or another, but your poem indicates the character knows and understands what and why he or she does it. Very good.
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Very nice tone and flow to this. I like the idea of questioning ones own analysis of life, so to speak. I think most of us analyze in some form or another, but your poem indicates the character knows and understands what and why he or she does it. Very good.
Comment Written 09-Jan-2009
Comment from Marathonwriter
I am not a poet, so I don't feel qualified to make any suggestions! I looked up the contest and became even more mystified. It reads a bit rough, but I enjoyed the humor.
Chris
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2009
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I am not a poet, so I don't feel qualified to make any suggestions! I looked up the contest and became even more mystified. It reads a bit rough, but I enjoyed the humor.
Chris
Comment Written 09-Jan-2009
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2009
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Best way to read this, I suppose, is if it were free verse. Glad you saw the humor in it! Thanks for your review. :-)) Sue
Comment from wierdgrace
I could not enter this because I have enough trouble on my own with small ones but this is great, and I love it, thank you for sharing, and good luck in the contest, Your structure is perfect and easy to read, image strong, loved it.
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2009
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I could not enter this because I have enough trouble on my own with small ones but this is great, and I love it, thank you for sharing, and good luck in the contest, Your structure is perfect and easy to read, image strong, loved it.
Comment Written 09-Jan-2009
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2009
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I've looked at this contest for a few days and thought...nah. But, it really is quite easy. Much easier than one might think. I whipped this out in no time flat. Give it a whirl! Thanks very much for your great review and compliments. :-)) Sue
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you deseave it, I am running out of votes and six so next month.
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I see you are doing great in the contest, I am falling back oh well, I wont be entering for a bit, surgery on teeth tomorrow. keep going and good luck. your haiku is great.
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I see you are doing great in the contest, I am falling back oh well, I wont be entering for a bit, surgery on teeth tomorrow. keep going and good luck. your haiku is great.
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I see you are doing great in the contest, I am falling back oh well, I wont be entering for a bit, surgery on teeth tomorrow. keep going and good luck. your haiku is great.
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I didn't know I was doing well. Will run over and see how the vote is going! Bummer about the surgery. Hope it's not too serious. Impacted tooth? Gum issues?
Oh, God! I don't like to think of it. Because I have been procrastinating on a few things that need to be done, myself.
Best to you! Get those painkillers!
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no I have tummors and the meds are rotting my root in my teeth, before I look terrible they are pulling them all and putting in false teeth, then I have a morphine pump put in my back. life of cancer.
Comment from FredCollingwood
I once over thought the meaning of life. All I cmae up with is that's it's one giant science fair project for somebody... and he's pulling a C-. Good poem!
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reply by the author on 09-Jan-2009
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I once over thought the meaning of life. All I cmae up with is that's it's one giant science fair project for somebody... and he's pulling a C-. Good poem!
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Comment Written 09-Jan-2009
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2009
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LOL!!! It IS a science project and getting closer to a "D"! Ha! I do have people tell me that I think too deeply. Hey, that's just something else to ponder about: WHY DO I DO THAT? HA!!! Thanks so much for your great review and compliments. :-)) Sue
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I also think you should be concerned with why you're concerned about why you think you think about things so much.
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Laughing ALL over myself!! Too funny!!!
Comment from Domino
Hi, Sue
This is a strange contest, and I must be honest and say the style is not ta my taste. I would've missed the rhymes completely if I hadn't checked the rules. You've done a great metered job and met the criteria perfectly. Great job within the constraints, though I wouldn't wanna read too many a these things, with respect ta 'Jack'.
Just not my bag, LOL. Well done, Ray xx
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reply by the author on 09-Jan-2009
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Hi, Sue
This is a strange contest, and I must be honest and say the style is not ta my taste. I would've missed the rhymes completely if I hadn't checked the rules. You've done a great metered job and met the criteria perfectly. Great job within the constraints, though I wouldn't wanna read too many a these things, with respect ta 'Jack'.
Just not my bag, LOL. Well done, Ray xx
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Comment Written 09-Jan-2009
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2009
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I saw this contest for a few days now and didn't show an interest. But, for some reason, today I just went for it. Now going to go read all the other's works and see what they've done with it. Thanks much for your review (even though it goes against your grain! - HA!!) - :-)) Sue