CSP: A Collection of Poems
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Comment from Algernon
How very very true. It takes me forever to make my mind up. But once I have....It's wrong.
Doubt does cause brain fog. This is very clever and plumb...
Well done sixteezkid with sixteakids
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How very very true. It takes me forever to make my mind up. But once I have....It's wrong.
Doubt does cause brain fog. This is very clever and plumb...
Well done sixteezkid with sixteakids
Comment Written 15-Dec-2008
Comment from Domino
Hi, Sue.
I''m confused and can't make my mind up about this one, LOL! When in 'doubt' give it 'five' I say, I think!
Seriously very clever with strong and suitable word choice. Like the three 'D's which add alliteration.
Very well written. Best wishes, Ray xx
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Hi, Sue.
I''m confused and can't make my mind up about this one, LOL! When in 'doubt' give it 'five' I say, I think!
Seriously very clever with strong and suitable word choice. Like the three 'D's which add alliteration.
Very well written. Best wishes, Ray xx
Comment Written 15-Dec-2008
reply by the author on 15-Dec-2008
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Ray, You GOT me! Ha! I read your first line and then, I WAS IN DOUBT! - LOL !! Thanks so much for your very kind and 'cheeky' review. :-)) Sue
Comment from Juleeann
This is a great write and fits the Modified Cinquain format perfectly. Good job with the poem and the description. Carry on,
Juleeann
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This is a great write and fits the Modified Cinquain format perfectly. Good job with the poem and the description. Carry on,
Juleeann
Comment Written 15-Dec-2008
Comment from Josipher32
I thought this was an excellently written word cinquain. you followed the format correctly and I felt the descriptions you used provided much insight into doubt.
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I thought this was an excellently written word cinquain. you followed the format correctly and I felt the descriptions you used provided much insight into doubt.
Comment Written 15-Dec-2008
reply by the author on 15-Dec-2008
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Josipher, thank you for your most kind review and lovely comments. With warmest regards, Sue
Comment from Marjorie D.
Wow! Usually, I don't review poetry, but I'm happy to have come across your cinquain. It's perfect! It meets all the requirements to a tea. The subject is an interesting choice, too.
Super, Sixteezkid!
Marjorie
reply by the author on 15-Dec-2008
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Wow! Usually, I don't review poetry, but I'm happy to have come across your cinquain. It's perfect! It meets all the requirements to a tea. The subject is an interesting choice, too.
Super, Sixteezkid!
Marjorie
Comment Written 15-Dec-2008
reply by the author on 15-Dec-2008
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Marjorie, what a most generous review! A big-six for this little-bit! HA! And a "Wow" to boot. A great gift to my work today. With warmest regards, Sue
Comment from Penpal
Though the chosen style can get choppy, yours flows smooth and has well written psychological meaning. I found it to be very expressive and true to form.
Penpal
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Though the chosen style can get choppy, yours flows smooth and has well written psychological meaning. I found it to be very expressive and true to form.
Penpal
Comment Written 15-Dec-2008
reply by the author on 15-Dec-2008
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Penpal, I have found this format to be very useful for practice of word usage and honing. Looks little, but a good workout! HA! Glad you liked it and thank you for your very kind review and comments! :-)) Sue
Comment from Sarah_Goldwell
This is an excellent and very clever little poem, I liked it very much. I love the artwork it complements the poem well, doubt is like guilt a wasted emotion.
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This is an excellent and very clever little poem, I liked it very much. I love the artwork it complements the poem well, doubt is like guilt a wasted emotion.
Comment Written 15-Dec-2008
reply by the author on 15-Dec-2008
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Such a pathetic waste, indeed. So, it must be exposed! Ha! Glad you liked it and thanks so much for your very kind comments and review. With regards, Sue
Comment from Narina Menderlin
I really liked this one. I especially loved the word choice you used. I liked the order in which you used those words. well done!
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reply by the author on 15-Dec-2008
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I really liked this one. I especially loved the word choice you used. I liked the order in which you used those words. well done!
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Comment Written 15-Dec-2008
reply by the author on 15-Dec-2008
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Narina, so glad you enjoyed this little work. Thank you very much for your most kind review and comments. :-)) Sue
Comment from Curt Mongold
I see you are really getting into different forms. That's great! I love to see people expanding their horizons in the art forms. This one is definitely a good one cuz!
Keep up the good work!
Sincerely,
Curt
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I see you are really getting into different forms. That's great! I love to see people expanding their horizons in the art forms. This one is definitely a good one cuz!
Keep up the good work!
Sincerely,
Curt
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Comment Written 15-Dec-2008
reply by the author on 15-Dec-2008
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Trying to stay sharp with word usage and this lends a good hand for the practice. Glad you liked it! And thanks for your most kind review. :-)) cuz sue