Reaching my Soul
True love story28 total reviews
Comment from babylonia
pupa,
wow~ all of that in 249 words ~ good job. its great. it is so you. easy to read and follow. no spaggies do i see. imagery is excellent. so much to see and feel. nicely done. keep up the good work~
good luck~
love,
barbara
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2008
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pupa,
wow~ all of that in 249 words ~ good job. its great. it is so you. easy to read and follow. no spaggies do i see. imagery is excellent. so much to see and feel. nicely done. keep up the good work~
good luck~
love,
barbara
Comment Written 04-Dec-2008
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2008
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Thanks Barbara, I appreciate your comments in this review.
Love
Pupa
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pupa,
you are very welcome~
love,
barbara
Comment from justmade
I like this one Pupa,like a dialogue.
The ending is really nice, I didn't really see that coming.
Is this biographical my dear friend? I hope you both get to meet one day.
Much love,
Justmade.
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2008
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I like this one Pupa,like a dialogue.
The ending is really nice, I didn't really see that coming.
Is this biographical my dear friend? I hope you both get to meet one day.
Much love,
Justmade.
Comment Written 04-Dec-2008
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2008
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Thanks Justmade, yes it is bio!
I hope one day we get a chance to meet too. I cannot see this working, if we don't, it would be too cruel.
Love
Pupa
Comment from Kingsland
I usually can understand what you have written but this one has me confused. Is this intended to be two people speaking to one another? for I found this to be rather vague in that sense. I usually like what you write but this one has me confused.This was my pleasure to have read and reviewed it... John
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2008
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I usually can understand what you have written but this one has me confused. Is this intended to be two people speaking to one another? for I found this to be rather vague in that sense. I usually like what you write but this one has me confused.This was my pleasure to have read and reviewed it... John
Comment Written 04-Dec-2008
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2008
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Hi John,
I am sorry to confuse you, maybe I should have added in my author's notes that it is a contest that says
Calling all smooth talkers. What will be your best lines to make sure the person you have interest in is hooked?
My first line I considered not chating up someone, but sort of a nice line.
Hope this clarifies it a little.
Thanks for the review.
Love
Pupa
Comment from Mrs Happy Poet
This is very well written and is a beautiful piece to share with all of your readers very romantic in your words I enjoyed good luck in the contest regards Fuller
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2008
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This is very well written and is a beautiful piece to share with all of your readers very romantic in your words I enjoyed good luck in the contest regards Fuller
Comment Written 04-Dec-2008
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2008
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Thank you so much Fuller, your words are uplifting and supportive, appreciate that.
Love
Pupa
Comment from fastdigits
A beautiful and artistically
crafted love story, both tender
and emotional as you go through
the dialog between you and your
soul mate.
I see that this is a true story
which you have written about, which
makes it even more beautiful and
heart-felt.
You have bared your soul in this
exquisite writing of the love of
a man and a woman.
I wish you nothing but warmth
and happiness in the future, as
well as that you win this contest.
I have given you six stars because
of the truth in which you write which
comes through in this love story you
have posted.
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2008
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A beautiful and artistically
crafted love story, both tender
and emotional as you go through
the dialog between you and your
soul mate.
I see that this is a true story
which you have written about, which
makes it even more beautiful and
heart-felt.
You have bared your soul in this
exquisite writing of the love of
a man and a woman.
I wish you nothing but warmth
and happiness in the future, as
well as that you win this contest.
I have given you six stars because
of the truth in which you write which
comes through in this love story you
have posted.
Comment Written 04-Dec-2008
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2008
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Hi fastdigits,
This is very generous of you to give me all those stars. I thank you from all my heart and I'm glad you liked that dialogue. Appreciate your very uplifting, kind and supportive comments.
Love
Pupa
Comment from Gert sherwood
Hello PUPA,
a budding romance through cyber space.
I hope what you said here in your closure will become true-
Someday, somehow, somewhere we will meet and never part again?
I don't know who was the smooth talker both dialogue's were great
the best to you in the contest.
Gert
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2008
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Hello PUPA,
a budding romance through cyber space.
I hope what you said here in your closure will become true-
Someday, somehow, somewhere we will meet and never part again?
I don't know who was the smooth talker both dialogue's were great
the best to you in the contest.
Gert
Comment Written 04-Dec-2008
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2008
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Thanks Gert, I hope so too, someday!
Love
Pupa
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Smiles PUPA
Gert
Comment from Rdfrdmom2
This is a marvelous pick up line, PUPA. I certainly hope it works for both of you. I've thought about, prayed for, and been concerned for your welfare over the last couple of weeks. Hope you are well. love, jan
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reply by the author on 04-Dec-2008
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This is a marvelous pick up line, PUPA. I certainly hope it works for both of you. I've thought about, prayed for, and been concerned for your welfare over the last couple of weeks. Hope you are well. love, jan
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Comment Written 04-Dec-2008
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2008
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Oh Jan, how sweet of you to be concerned about and pry for me, this really touched me a lot.
A big thank you from all my heart.
Apreciate reviewing my dialogue.
Love
Pupa
Comment from Nightwind1
I have heard these lines before, many times. But they are always from some unseen face in the computer, trying to smooze their way into my heart. I learned long ago, that the person behind the lines is never as the appear on the screen. I am so glad I am married to a man that is real in life and not on a hidden screen.
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reply by the author on 04-Dec-2008
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I have heard these lines before, many times. But they are always from some unseen face in the computer, trying to smooze their way into my heart. I learned long ago, that the person behind the lines is never as the appear on the screen. I am so glad I am married to a man that is real in life and not on a hidden screen.
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Comment Written 04-Dec-2008
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2008
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Thank you for your warning review. I appreciate it very much because this is so true. But if I ever meet that man, I will find out, no rushing until things are clear.
Thank you so much, I really appreciate your comments and review.
Love
Pupa
