CSP: A Collection of Poems
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Comment from Domino
Lovely writing here.
Effective repetition, though if we had too much 'peace' we'd probably get bored with it. LOL. It's that happy medium that seems unatainable. Very poetic and 'peaceful' read. Best wishes, Ray xx
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Lovely writing here.
Effective repetition, though if we had too much 'peace' we'd probably get bored with it. LOL. It's that happy medium that seems unatainable. Very poetic and 'peaceful' read. Best wishes, Ray xx
Comment Written 19-Nov-2008
Comment from Lynar
I enjoyed how the words, (Peace, Sweet Peace) resonated in my mind from start to end. The crafted use of language devices like a Ballard to honor the moment like the (warmth to the depth), in metaphor. The vivid imagery to capture the peace and feel the moment, (glorious taste waiting to be sipped. It made in my mind music on the page. I would recommend to my friends, Peace, Sweet Peace. No adverse remarks. Excellent.
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I enjoyed how the words, (Peace, Sweet Peace) resonated in my mind from start to end. The crafted use of language devices like a Ballard to honor the moment like the (warmth to the depth), in metaphor. The vivid imagery to capture the peace and feel the moment, (glorious taste waiting to be sipped. It made in my mind music on the page. I would recommend to my friends, Peace, Sweet Peace. No adverse remarks. Excellent.
Comment Written 19-Nov-2008
Comment from dportwood
6teezkid,
This is the 3rd writing of yours that I have seen in a short span of time. I find your creations to be enjoyable showing poetic feeling about each of your subjects. I especially like the accompanying artwork of this one.
Duane
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6teezkid,
This is the 3rd writing of yours that I have seen in a short span of time. I find your creations to be enjoyable showing poetic feeling about each of your subjects. I especially like the accompanying artwork of this one.
Duane
Comment Written 19-Nov-2008
Comment from Lois Delaney
Another nice free verse. The picture you've picked is quite pretty. The sand almost looks like grains of salt. I. too, love the country, outdoors. That's where I live, and I love it. These country roads are filled with the presence of cool air, and drifts of snow right now. But not a whole lot. Hugs, my cher!
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Another nice free verse. The picture you've picked is quite pretty. The sand almost looks like grains of salt. I. too, love the country, outdoors. That's where I live, and I love it. These country roads are filled with the presence of cool air, and drifts of snow right now. But not a whole lot. Hugs, my cher!
Comment Written 19-Nov-2008
Comment from Scarlettdreams
Isn't it funny where we find peace. I have always found a profound peace in the snow. You capture well the fleeting feeling that we sometimes encounter. well done. Bravo
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Isn't it funny where we find peace. I have always found a profound peace in the snow. You capture well the fleeting feeling that we sometimes encounter. well done. Bravo
Comment Written 19-Nov-2008
Comment from S.Yocom
This is a nice, relaxing little poem, 6teezkid. I'm sure that you purposefully made the last stanza have only three lines, but I wished for a fourth to keep the continuity going. You could have added a second line to that verse, such as "Please let me remain." Anyway, I do like your poem.
Sally
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This is a nice, relaxing little poem, 6teezkid. I'm sure that you purposefully made the last stanza have only three lines, but I wished for a fourth to keep the continuity going. You could have added a second line to that verse, such as "Please let me remain." Anyway, I do like your poem.
Sally
Comment Written 19-Nov-2008
Comment from Mrs Happy Poet
Peace, sweet peace
Rest in the arms of a breeze
Warmth to the depth... cool to the touch
The part I liked the best I have pasted above a beautiful poem very well done again regards Fuller
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Peace, sweet peace
Rest in the arms of a breeze
Warmth to the depth... cool to the touch
The part I liked the best I have pasted above a beautiful poem very well done again regards Fuller
Comment Written 19-Nov-2008
Comment from electroswiftword
It matters not the time or place. I believe peace comes when the senses find pleasure and the soul finds rest.
But when it comes it's time to take a break. Something I like now to do the best. I love your writing scheme, like mine not restricted to artistic scheme or formal design, just flows through our mind. Retired in 2007. Free at last from running the rich man's race. Will
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It matters not the time or place. I believe peace comes when the senses find pleasure and the soul finds rest.
But when it comes it's time to take a break. Something I like now to do the best. I love your writing scheme, like mine not restricted to artistic scheme or formal design, just flows through our mind. Retired in 2007. Free at last from running the rich man's race. Will
Comment Written 19-Nov-2008
Comment from rizaroza
Very calming and subdue poetry and great introflection. I enjoyed this very much and I also desire "Peace, sweet peace". I can clearly see you've recently become an "empty nester" because peace was something foreign to me and I had to get used to it when my kids left home. Great work, you are talented.
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Very calming and subdue poetry and great introflection. I enjoyed this very much and I also desire "Peace, sweet peace". I can clearly see you've recently become an "empty nester" because peace was something foreign to me and I had to get used to it when my kids left home. Great work, you are talented.
Comment Written 19-Nov-2008
Comment from lennis
Good work here. This is a message that many feel, I believe. We all wish for our own sense of peace and you have depicted yours here very well. Even though my hectic life doesn't often allow it, I yearn for it nonetheless. The last stanza says that very thing: "peace, sweet peace, Don't wrest me away from your fleeting presence." Good work.
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Good work here. This is a message that many feel, I believe. We all wish for our own sense of peace and you have depicted yours here very well. Even though my hectic life doesn't often allow it, I yearn for it nonetheless. The last stanza says that very thing: "peace, sweet peace, Don't wrest me away from your fleeting presence." Good work.
Comment Written 19-Nov-2008