Comment from c_lucas

Excellent

Very well written with good dialogue and a good flow of words that makes for a good read. Very good imagery and descriptive scheme.

 Comment Written 09-Aug-2008

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reply by the author on 09-Aug-2008

Hey Charlie,

Thanks for the comments, my friend. I appreciate the R&R and your support.

Hugs,
Gayle

reply by c_lucas on 10-Aug-2008

You're welcome, Gayle. Charlie

Comment from butterflykiss

Excellent

Did the Russians make a mistake and buy property or did they hide the sign? Uhm A mystery to be solved. Are we in a cold war with the Russians again? I sure hope there is such a fuel as you spoke about it would be nice. Enjoyed it.
Looking foreword to the next installment.
Butterflykiss

 Comment Written 09-Aug-2008

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reply by the author on 09-Aug-2008

Hi Jane,

Well, it's up there...on the moon. Scientists figure that at present usage, it would supply 44,000 years or cheap, clean, non-poluting energy. Now what more can a girl ask for, huh?

So good to see you and thanks for the great comments,

Hugs,
Gayle

reply by butterflykiss on 10-Aug-2008

Dang I'll go down to the bank bright and early Monday morning and write out a check to get this started.LOL
Butterflykiss

Comment from Korton

Excellent

Another interesting piece to the story. I'm surprised that Jim and Lenny didn't tell Andy about the body. As far as the sign is concerned, if I were the kidnappers, I would have pulled the sign to avoid the possibility of lookieloos showing up while I was busy. Very well done, again.

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 Comment Written 09-Aug-2008

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reply by the author on 09-Aug-2008

Hey Frank,

You know me, tricky dickens. Remember, back a ways, when the realtor drove the Russians to the property, showed them around and then they wrote her a check? She pulled the sign up and put it in her trunk.

'Course, I wonder what that check is good for...prolly invisible ink! Anyway, at least they don't have to try to convince Lenny there are three stalkers. He wouldn't buy it.

Thanks for the great comments, my friend,

Hugs,
Gayle

reply by Korton on 09-Aug-2008

Darn! I must be slipping, I forgot all about the realtor and the check. I usually recall such events.