Comment from nor84

Excellent

Hello Gayle. Good to catch you again

Well, I'm happy to report the story is moving along, and I didn't find any spag at all.

 Comment Written 15-Jul-2008

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reply by the author on 15-Jul-2008

Hey Nor,

Well that sure makes me smile, especially coming from someone with your expertise. Thank you very much.

Hugs,
Gayle

Comment from Kym Jade

Excellent

Gee Rudy does a good job training these dogs. So a dog attacked Candace in the past, bet it was some yappy little thing. Tee hee. Tom Harris sure is a warped individual, the way he is fixated on Candace. Can?t wait to see what you have planned for this book.

Suggestion:
"Are you about ready for bed, punkin? (did you mean pumpkin here?)

Love and blessings

Congratulation on being nominated with a chapter in the new contest. Yea we got one in too.

 Comment Written 15-Jul-2008

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reply by the author on 15-Jul-2008

Metcha Ladies!

Yes, Rudy is a wizzard, that's for sure. Yes, Candace has a doggie past that will come out soon.

That "punkin" thing is an endearment, like sweetie or honey. It is a derivitave of pumpkin, tho.

Thanks so much for the comments and your lovely stars,

Hugs,
Gayle

Comment from Norbanus

Excellent

Each time I see the Tom Harris character, I get a clearer picture of him. Even though there isn't muct specific description my imagination has provided. That's a sign of damn good writing.

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 Comment Written 15-Jul-2008

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reply by the author on 15-Jul-2008

Hey Freddie,

Yep, Tom woke up yesterday and man, I got a really clear picture of where we're going now, at least as far as he's concerned.

It's those creepy little wiggles up your spine. I like that scare rather than the "boo" type of thing. So glad you liked this one!

Hugs,
Annabelle