A Serendipitous Meeting
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Comment from nomi338
Are you kidding me? this is so well written it is totally believable. This story as much and maybe even more realistic than all your other stories. If this was a movie I would be so into it, I would not want to miss one single scene.
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2025
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Are you kidding me? this is so well written it is totally believable. This story as much and maybe even more realistic than all your other stories. If this was a movie I would be so into it, I would not want to miss one single scene.
Comment Written 30-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2025
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Thank you for the encouragement.
Comment from Begin Again
There it is...I checked a few times and then almost forgot to come back...Glad I didn't miss this chapter. You maneuvered through the doctor's appt and the shopping quite well. Very enjoyable read.
Smiles, Carol
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2025
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There it is...I checked a few times and then almost forgot to come back...Glad I didn't miss this chapter. You maneuvered through the doctor's appt and the shopping quite well. Very enjoyable read.
Smiles, Carol
Comment Written 30-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2025
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Thank you for stopping by, again, and leaving this kind review.
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I'm enjoying this story.
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
That would be awful if their photo was taken and put in the paper for her father to see. Quite honestly, I would be embarrassed by talking about bras in front of someone other than my hubby. But I'm sure many others wouldn't be. I enjoyed this chapter, Barbara, and look forward to the next one. I will be coming on FS on Sundays to read those I follow. This is getting really good. Well done, my friend. :) Sandra xxx
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2025
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That would be awful if their photo was taken and put in the paper for her father to see. Quite honestly, I would be embarrassed by talking about bras in front of someone other than my hubby. But I'm sure many others wouldn't be. I enjoyed this chapter, Barbara, and look forward to the next one. I will be coming on FS on Sundays to read those I follow. This is getting really good. Well done, my friend. :) Sandra xxx
Comment Written 30-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2025
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Thank you for the kind review. Please know you're in my prayers.
Comment from Jasmine Girl
This chapter highlights a pivotal moment in Rebeka's pregnancy journey as she receives critical medical advice and support from Dr. Sharp and Tyler. During her check-up, she learns about potential complications, including preterm labor, preeclampsia, and gestational diabetes, while Tyler reassures her that he will be by her side.
Well done.
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2025
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This chapter highlights a pivotal moment in Rebeka's pregnancy journey as she receives critical medical advice and support from Dr. Sharp and Tyler. During her check-up, she learns about potential complications, including preterm labor, preeclampsia, and gestational diabetes, while Tyler reassures her that he will be by her side.
Well done.
Comment Written 30-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2025
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Karen Cherry
You had her cringing exactly right, With her background it is amazing she is not a total loony. I knew he would get all the dresses . She needs overalls and Tshirts they were so comfortable. She needs underwear lend Aunt Beth your card and tell her to get support hose bras, nursing bras, big old lady underwear, and shoes. Feet swell. and, if she is going on walks around the ranch, she will need boots. Good writing. Karen
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reply by the author on 30-Mar-2025
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You had her cringing exactly right, With her background it is amazing she is not a total loony. I knew he would get all the dresses . She needs overalls and Tshirts they were so comfortable. She needs underwear lend Aunt Beth your card and tell her to get support hose bras, nursing bras, big old lady underwear, and shoes. Feet swell. and, if she is going on walks around the ranch, she will need boots. Good writing. Karen
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Comment Written 30-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2025
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LOL This is just the beginning of shopping. LOL Thank you for the kind review and understanding.
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Just my brain working overtime. He is pushing her hard, and at some point she is going to blow. So much is unfamiliar. So much is taboo. He is already over the line. She is gonna blow. She needs a girlfriend. That would help. Does he know someone with a little kid? That would help.
Mz. Buttinski signing off. :-)
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LOL After she visits with her dad, she has a meltdown. Your comments always make me smile.
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Wow ! Am I psychic or what? Great minds and all that. Love you sweetie. Karen
Comment from Sanku
This has a lot of details about pregnancy related matters The doctor is thorough. Rebeka will have to remain in Tys home The dialogues are very well done
The crowd is the press? That would make Rebekka uncomfortable..
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reply by the author on 30-Mar-2025
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This has a lot of details about pregnancy related matters The doctor is thorough. Rebeka will have to remain in Tys home The dialogues are very well done
The crowd is the press? That would make Rebekka uncomfortable..
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Comment Written 30-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2025
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More about the crowd will come out in the next post. Thank you for the kind review.
