Trust
A thoughtful poem52 total reviews
Comment from nancyjam
This is so true. Trust is so important in a relationship and a little pride doesn't hurt, but too much pride can sometimes cause conflict.
Nancy
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This is so true. Trust is so important in a relationship and a little pride doesn't hurt, but too much pride can sometimes cause conflict.
Nancy
Comment Written 31-Mar-2025
Comment from Bill Schott
This poem, Trust, is the connection between knowing someone and knowing how they may react and respond when conditions require it. It's best to know, good or bad, who to trust.
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This poem, Trust, is the connection between knowing someone and knowing how they may react and respond when conditions require it. It's best to know, good or bad, who to trust.
Comment Written 31-Mar-2025
Comment from Harry Craft
A great way to show trust in a poem Jesse. I truly enjoyed reading this poem on such a real subject. The photo is amazing too because Dolphins they say are as smart as we are and the photo goes great with trust. Keep up the great work!
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A great way to show trust in a poem Jesse. I truly enjoyed reading this poem on such a real subject. The photo is amazing too because Dolphins they say are as smart as we are and the photo goes great with trust. Keep up the great work!
Comment Written 31-Mar-2025
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
Dear Jesse, this is a gentle and reflective verse about the qualities that unite us in harmony and peace. To believe in the other person is important for, without that trust, the relationship is built on unstable ground and can never be properly secured. In addition, when you refer to pride, this doesn't have its negative connotations but, instead, is a proudness of oneself and the other partner. For, how can one love another if one hasn't begun to love oneself. Simple requirements to combine to create a love that is enduring and strong. Thank you for sharing your thought-provoking verse, Jess. Warm wishes Debbie
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Dear Jesse, this is a gentle and reflective verse about the qualities that unite us in harmony and peace. To believe in the other person is important for, without that trust, the relationship is built on unstable ground and can never be properly secured. In addition, when you refer to pride, this doesn't have its negative connotations but, instead, is a proudness of oneself and the other partner. For, how can one love another if one hasn't begun to love oneself. Simple requirements to combine to create a love that is enduring and strong. Thank you for sharing your thought-provoking verse, Jess. Warm wishes Debbie
Comment Written 31-Mar-2025
Comment from Begin Again
Trust is a powerful bond in any relationship and when it is cracked and broken, sometimes its impossible to mend. You did a marvelous job of describing the emotions.
Smiles, Carol
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Trust is a powerful bond in any relationship and when it is cracked and broken, sometimes its impossible to mend. You did a marvelous job of describing the emotions.
Smiles, Carol
Comment Written 31-Mar-2025
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Good artwork and presentation, Jesse.
-You wrote a good poem with a good topic.
-Effective imagery, rhyme, and internal rhyme.
-You show that very well in line one,
along with a good message
about trust in a relationship.
-A good second verse also with internal rhyme
and message about bonding with a loved one.
-A very good concluding verse about love,
"where beauty, peace
and hope can reside."
-Very well done.
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-Good artwork and presentation, Jesse.
-You wrote a good poem with a good topic.
-Effective imagery, rhyme, and internal rhyme.
-You show that very well in line one,
along with a good message
about trust in a relationship.
-A good second verse also with internal rhyme
and message about bonding with a loved one.
-A very good concluding verse about love,
"where beauty, peace
and hope can reside."
-Very well done.
Comment Written 31-Mar-2025
Comment from dragonpoet
Hi Jesse,
This is a well done free verse poem defining true love. It is the kind of love we all hope to be lucky enough to find and keep.
Keep writing and stay healthy.
Have a great day.
Joan
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Hi Jesse,
This is a well done free verse poem defining true love. It is the kind of love we all hope to be lucky enough to find and keep.
Keep writing and stay healthy.
Have a great day.
Joan
Comment Written 31-Mar-2025
Comment from Douglas Goff
Very nicely stated, Jesse. Once trust is lost it is so very hard to get it back. Most times you can not.
A very thoughtful poem.
Great read.
Douglas
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Very nicely stated, Jesse. Once trust is lost it is so very hard to get it back. Most times you can not.
A very thoughtful poem.
Great read.
Douglas
Comment Written 31-Mar-2025
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
I really enjoyed the flow of your poem! It felt smooth reading it. I love how your poem shared such warmth and wisdom. For me it is a beautiful reminder of what truly matters in relationships. Keep writing - your words have a lovely way of touching the heart!
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2025
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I really enjoyed the flow of your poem! It felt smooth reading it. I love how your poem shared such warmth and wisdom. For me it is a beautiful reminder of what truly matters in relationships. Keep writing - your words have a lovely way of touching the heart!
Comment Written 30-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2025
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Thanks, Michael. You touch my spirit with your kind words. I am glad you enjoyed the flow and wisdom of the poem. I am proud to know it reminded you of what truly matters in relationships.
I will continue to write what is in my heart. You have honored me with this lovely review.
Jesse
Comment from mrsmajor
A well written truth filled post, Jesse...
Indeed, without trusting the one you chose to spend your life with...how could one even survive...
I lost my dearest friend, and husband, more than thirty years ago...
I've never met another man that I could even begin to trust.
Thanks for sharing this with us, it was thoughtful, and so true.
All the best, to you and yours...
Warmly,
Victoria
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A well written truth filled post, Jesse...
Indeed, without trusting the one you chose to spend your life with...how could one even survive...
I lost my dearest friend, and husband, more than thirty years ago...
I've never met another man that I could even begin to trust.
Thanks for sharing this with us, it was thoughtful, and so true.
All the best, to you and yours...
Warmly,
Victoria
Comment Written 30-Mar-2025
