She Brought the Sunshine
She Brought the Sunshine Into My Life.45 total reviews
Comment from Sally Law
Beautiful love poem, Harry, in alternating rhyme. I prefer alternating rhyme because it sounds less forced. Just my opinion. Poetry is for everyone, especially the romantics. I hope this one is true for you in some way, or all.
Sending you my best today as always.
Sal :))
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2025
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Beautiful love poem, Harry, in alternating rhyme. I prefer alternating rhyme because it sounds less forced. Just my opinion. Poetry is for everyone, especially the romantics. I hope this one is true for you in some way, or all.
Sending you my best today as always.
Sal :))
Comment Written 25-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2025
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Well, thank you so much Sally. I truly appreciate the kind words and great review!
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Most welcome! Sal :))
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Nice artwork and presentation.
-You wrote a good poem with
effective imagery and rhyme.
-A very good opening verse.
-I like the theme of sunshine
and how it relates to your relationship.
-A very good comparison about how
your love grew "like a sprouting tree."
-Very well done.
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2025
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-Nice artwork and presentation.
-You wrote a good poem with
effective imagery and rhyme.
-A very good opening verse.
-I like the theme of sunshine
and how it relates to your relationship.
-A very good comparison about how
your love grew "like a sprouting tree."
-Very well done.
Comment Written 25-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2025
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Well, thank you so much Pam. I truly appreciate the great review!
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You are very welcome, Harry.
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Roger that!
Comment from Tim Margetts
I enjoyed this, Harry.
It sums up a lifetime of love and devotion to your wife.
The bond of two souls meeting who are destined for each other is indeed a wonderful thing. That doesn't mean it's all sweetness and light, but it gives the strength to see beyond trials and build the strength of forever.
Tim
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2025
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I enjoyed this, Harry.
It sums up a lifetime of love and devotion to your wife.
The bond of two souls meeting who are destined for each other is indeed a wonderful thing. That doesn't mean it's all sweetness and light, but it gives the strength to see beyond trials and build the strength of forever.
Tim
Comment Written 25-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2025
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Thank you so much Tim. I truly appreciate the kind words, great review and you!
Comment from lyenochka
A thoughtful live poem about your beloved wife. I like your repeated theme of the sunshine and light that she brought into your life. Hope you shared this with her!
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2025
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A thoughtful live poem about your beloved wife. I like your repeated theme of the sunshine and light that she brought into your life. Hope you shared this with her!
Comment Written 25-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2025
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Thank you so much for the great review, kind words and you!
Comment from Jasmine Girl
What a rhyming romantic poem to your wife. I can tell you really appreciate her. You two also have a lovely son. Please enjoy your lovely family. It's very precious.
Well done.
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2025
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What a rhyming romantic poem to your wife. I can tell you really appreciate her. You two also have a lovely son. Please enjoy your lovely family. It's very precious.
Well done.
Comment Written 24-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2025
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Well, thank you so much Jasmine for the kind words, great review and you! I do appreciate that.
Comment from forestport12
Very emotional and touching poem. I really liked the way you made your wife the metaphor of sunlight. The flow and fusion of emotion was real and memorable.
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2025
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Very emotional and touching poem. I really liked the way you made your wife the metaphor of sunlight. The flow and fusion of emotion was real and memorable.
Comment Written 24-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2025
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Well, thank you so much for the kind words and great review! I truly appreciate that!
Comment from jmdg1954
Your repeated line: She brought the sunshine Into my life was enough to tell me you found the love of your life. Her love was, as you wrote, was the light to lead your path together and without son.
Nicely done Harry.
John
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2025
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Your repeated line: She brought the sunshine Into my life was enough to tell me you found the love of your life. Her love was, as you wrote, was the light to lead your path together and without son.
Nicely done Harry.
John
Comment Written 24-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2025
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Thank you so much John for the kind words, great review and you! I truly appreciate that!
Comment from Pearl Edwards
I love your repeated line -
She brought the sunshine into my life
This is a lovely poem about love and what love shared can mean. Beautifully written Harry. Cheers
Valda
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2025
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I love your repeated line -
She brought the sunshine into my life
This is a lovely poem about love and what love shared can mean. Beautifully written Harry. Cheers
Valda
Comment Written 24-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2025
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Well, thank you so much Valda. I truly appreciate the kind words and great review!
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
I can virtually feel the heat of that sun through your free verse about love. Its rays pour forth as you celebrate the gift of an all-embracing love that has given you a wife and a son while setting your spirit free. Well done, Harry. Take care Debbie
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2025
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I can virtually feel the heat of that sun through your free verse about love. Its rays pour forth as you celebrate the gift of an all-embracing love that has given you a wife and a son while setting your spirit free. Well done, Harry. Take care Debbie
Comment Written 24-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2025
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Thank you so much Debbie. I truly appreciate the kind words, great review and you!
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You're welcome! I wanted to give you a nomination vote for spotting my error but I'm up to my limit. So next month...
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Roger that Debbie!
Comment from Janet Foor
An uplifting poem in the world of today. I'm happy she came into your life as well and brought the sunshine and goodness that comes from loving someone completely.
Nicely done Harry.
Blessings
janet
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2025
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An uplifting poem in the world of today. I'm happy she came into your life as well and brought the sunshine and goodness that comes from loving someone completely.
Nicely done Harry.
Blessings
janet
Comment Written 24-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2025
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Thank you so much Janet. I truly appreciate the kind words, great review and you!
