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Pure Pleasure

A night of passion

21 total reviews 
Comment from Peter Jarvis
Exceptional
This work has reached the exceptional level


This piece is a sensual and evocative exploration of intimacy, effectively capturing the connection between two partners who clearly love each other and still enjoy the ultimate act of intimacy. The writing is also quite smooth, utilising very vivid imagery and descriptive language that engages the reader in the experience.
A great entry for the contest.
Best of luck and I hope you enjoy many more anniversaries.
Bless you

 Comment Written 03-Mar-2025


reply by the author on 04-Mar-2025
    Thank you for your review!