Anatomy of a Marriage
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Comment from Ulla
Hi Beth, oh you write this so very well, and you hit it right on its head. Trenton, I don't think, has any intention of giving up drinking. He wants his wife to vouch for him, but she's reluctant. I don't blame her. I'm looking forward to what's next. Ulla xcx
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2024
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Hi Beth, oh you write this so very well, and you hit it right on its head. Trenton, I don't think, has any intention of giving up drinking. He wants his wife to vouch for him, but she's reluctant. I don't blame her. I'm looking forward to what's next. Ulla xcx
Comment Written 24-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2024
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Thank you so much Ulla. I'm pleased you like this story. I really appreciate the six stars.
Beth
Comment from Cecilia A Heiskary
This is a great story about addiction. Not sure the husband is being completely honest with himself. Sounds like he's playing a game just to play. He doesn't think he has a problem and until he admits it to himself he will never give up the alcohol.
Well done
Cecilia
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2024
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This is a great story about addiction. Not sure the husband is being completely honest with himself. Sounds like he's playing a game just to play. He doesn't think he has a problem and until he admits it to himself he will never give up the alcohol.
Well done
Cecilia
Comment Written 24-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2024
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Thank you, Cecilia. You are right. Trenton isn't being honest with himself and he won't get better that way. I appreciate your comments.
Beth
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You're welcome
Cecilia
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Trenton is a jerk and still doesn't believe he as a problem. Marsha is better off without him. I do like this story.
The moderator was speaking. "Ladies and gentlemen, (speaking,)
A man rose and spoke. "Hello, my name is Joe Tomkins (spoke,)
"He continued by saying, "This is my wife, Greta. (omit quotation mark in front of 'He')
but I not going to be able to talk to anyone here today. (I'm)
That is the best I can do for right now". (now.")
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reply by the author on 07-Dec-2024
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Trenton is a jerk and still doesn't believe he as a problem. Marsha is better off without him. I do like this story.
The moderator was speaking. "Ladies and gentlemen, (speaking,)
A man rose and spoke. "Hello, my name is Joe Tomkins (spoke,)
"He continued by saying, "This is my wife, Greta. (omit quotation mark in front of 'He')
but I not going to be able to talk to anyone here today. (I'm)
That is the best I can do for right now". (now.")
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Comment Written 24-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2024
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Thank you, Barbara. I appreciate the review and you help with edits.
Beth
Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
I definitely sounds like Trenton still needs to be in there and start facing reality before he is released. I'm glad she refused to lie for him. good chapter.
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reply by the author on 07-Dec-2024
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I definitely sounds like Trenton still needs to be in there and start facing reality before he is released. I'm glad she refused to lie for him. good chapter.
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Comment Written 24-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2024
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Thank you, Marilyn. I think you are right. He is about to lose his wife which he seems to want as long as he can keep her in the dark about what he does on the side.
Beth
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Thank you, Marilyn. I think you are right. He is about to lose his wife which he seems to want as long as he can keep her in the dark about what he does on the side.
Beth
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Thank you, Marilyn. I think you are right. He is about to lose his wife which he seems to want as long as he can keep her in the dark about what he does on the side.
Beth
