Halloween at Ghost Lake
A Halloween Horror Poem21 total reviews
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
This is a horror story and you nailed the brief Beth. I loved your rhymes and metre as you told this inventive and chilling tale.
This line is a little awkward:
(With dogs, the villagers tracked her slayer)
suggest:
(With dogs, the village folk would track her slayer)
This is a fine post for the contest Beth, much enjoyed, love Dolly x x x
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This is a horror story and you nailed the brief Beth. I loved your rhymes and metre as you told this inventive and chilling tale.
This line is a little awkward:
(With dogs, the villagers tracked her slayer)
suggest:
(With dogs, the village folk would track her slayer)
This is a fine post for the contest Beth, much enjoyed, love Dolly x x x
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 30-Oct-2024