Comment from Mrs. KT

Exceptional

Hello, Gretchen!
Geesh!
You and Rachelle have certainly given me many moments of hilarity today!
What a twosome you are!
Scary as well!
I have so enjoyed how you both look at the same situation but from your own individual perspectives!
Humor abounds - although decidedly individual and unique from both of your pens!

Just one little edit needed, maybe. Below, I've copied and pasted two sentences. The second one doesn't sound right to me... Just a thought:

She cuts her eyes at me. "I can put you back there as well," she snaps.

I don't press it, just look once more a tinted divider wondering how I'd be feeling back there.

Thank you for sharing!
fondly,
diane

 Comment Written 20-Oct-2024

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reply by the author on 20-Oct-2024

Thank you, Diane. I will revisit that sentence. It is a tad awkward. I'm so glad you are enjoying this. I am having a blast, and hate to see it end. But, we are getting close. Thank you so much for this fine review and the exceptional rating. Gretchen

Comment from Wayne Fowler

Exceptional

I got the boobs reference. I'm just surprised Rachelle didn't lock you in the backseat for calling them 'antique'!
She cuts her eyes at me. "I can put you back there as well," she snaps. - One of the best lines of the entire story! She said it, but YOU wrote it!
Great teamwork.

 Comment Written 20-Oct-2024

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reply by the author on 20-Oct-2024

I was talking to Jane about the antique rack. Lol. My mouth has this little razor that comes out when it wants to. Thank you so much for this awesome review and the exceptional rating. Gretchen