Time Shall Betray Us All
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Comment from Michael Ludwinder
What a powerful look at time and how relentless it is! Your repetition of "Time shall betray us all some day" works so well. For me I see it as showing that we are all going to age and deal with the changes it brings. Your poem reminds us of the nature of time. Fantastic work!
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reply by the author on 14-Oct-2024
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What a powerful look at time and how relentless it is! Your repetition of "Time shall betray us all some day" works so well. For me I see it as showing that we are all going to age and deal with the changes it brings. Your poem reminds us of the nature of time. Fantastic work!
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Comment Written 13-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2024
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Michael, I am so pleased you like my approach to the theme of betrayal. Many thanks for the great review.