Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

I was wondering where you have been! I hope you are not searching icy areas for a winter picnic and can enjoy some warming autumn weather. Great picture and fun poem! Best wishes in the contest!

 Comment Written 09-Oct-2024

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reply by the author on 09-Oct-2024

Taking a bit of a break. Might try again to get Ned elected. Thank you for the boost.

reply by lyenochka on 09-Oct-2024

Yes, we need Ned to be elected. Everyone likes Ned. Not everyone likes our candidates. But there's a time when we have to vote against to protect democracy.

Comment from patcelaw

Excellent

This is a very nicely written haiku for the contest, and I wish you the very best in the contest. I am not sure I wanna go on a winter picnic especially in a cold place. Patricia.

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 Comment Written 09-Oct-2024

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reply by the author on 09-Oct-2024

Thank you, Patricia

Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose

Excellent

Excellent entry for the   haiku Contest. You grasped the form well.  Nice  presentation.  Your descriptive words flow well expressing clear  mental imagery. I like the last line, a great satori

Good luck in the contest.

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 Comment Written 09-Oct-2024

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reply by the author on 09-Oct-2024

Thank you, Gypsy