All About Someone
Most definitely maybe not about me26 total reviews
Comment from Charles D Ezell
One can always recognize a snob in horn rim glasses. I see nothing wrong with this write. It explains itself well. I wish you the best and thank you for sharing your talent.
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2024
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One can always recognize a snob in horn rim glasses. I see nothing wrong with this write. It explains itself well. I wish you the best and thank you for sharing your talent.
Comment Written 07-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2024
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Haha well, thank you!
xoxox
Comment from Ang Tang
I really liked this poem. I also relate, I prefer writing poems that rhyme and follow a predictable pattern. My only suggestion would be to make the second line longer? The first line has three parts, but the second only has 2, I think it would be smart to add a line in between the two you have.
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2024
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I really liked this poem. I also relate, I prefer writing poems that rhyme and follow a predictable pattern. My only suggestion would be to make the second line longer? The first line has three parts, but the second only has 2, I think it would be smart to add a line in between the two you have.
Comment Written 07-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2024
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Thank you! :)
Comment from gramalot8
I really enjoyed and got a chuckle out if this poem.
Great premise to that it might be you but maybe not.. with all your dos and don'ts described for us. And loved that you don't do XO's... maybe. Lol
Thanks for sharing this fun poem with us.
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2024
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I really enjoyed and got a chuckle out if this poem.
Great premise to that it might be you but maybe not.. with all your dos and don'ts described for us. And loved that you don't do XO's... maybe. Lol
Thanks for sharing this fun poem with us.
Comment Written 07-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2024
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lol thanks for picking up on the irony, my friend! many did not.;)
Xo
Jess
Comment from DonandVicki
As I have been gone from FanStory for several years and just this week returned, I am at a loss as who you are dear poet/ writer. But I do wish you well in the contest.
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2024
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As I have been gone from FanStory for several years and just this week returned, I am at a loss as who you are dear poet/ writer. But I do wish you well in the contest.
Comment Written 07-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2024
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Thanks so much!
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Ha ha ha, hardly prose, more like a well rhymed and metered poem and I loved the humour here in your clever poem, this is a fun post, good luck with the contest, love Dolly x x x
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reply by the author on 13-Oct-2024
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Ha ha ha, hardly prose, more like a well rhymed and metered poem and I loved the humour here in your clever poem, this is a fun post, good luck with the contest, love Dolly x x x
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Comment Written 07-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2024
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Thanks for getting my humor here, Dolly! lol
Xo
Jess
Comment from Brandy N. Morrison
I really enjoyed reading this poem! The flow was smooth, and I found myself getting drawn into the imagery with each stanza. But that last one? It was my favorite! The final line completely caught me off guard and made me laugh--it was such a fun and unexpected twist. It left me with a smile!
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reply by the author on 13-Oct-2024
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I really enjoyed reading this poem! The flow was smooth, and I found myself getting drawn into the imagery with each stanza. But that last one? It was my favorite! The final line completely caught me off guard and made me laugh--it was such a fun and unexpected twist. It left me with a smile!
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Comment Written 07-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2024
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Thank you!