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Miranda Chronicles: Teacher's Pet

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Miranda finds herself in another situation.

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Yeah, I'm with Miranda. Waylon is a teenage boy. His first reaction to hearing from the father who abandoned him, should be anger. That is a natural reaction for a male. Something's up. Good chapter.

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 Comment Written 30-Sep-2024


reply by the author on 30-Sep-2024
    Thank you for this. Maybe when his father is there face to face, the anger will come. I appreciate the great review. Gretchen