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Miranda finds herself in another situation.
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lancellot
Yeah, I'm with Miranda. Waylon is a teenage boy. His first reaction to hearing from the father who abandoned him, should be anger. That is a natural reaction for a male. Something's up. Good chapter.
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Comment Written 30-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2024
Thank you for this. Maybe when his father is there face to face, the anger will come. I appreciate the great review. Gretchen
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