Willing Hearts
Viewing comments for Chapter 37 "Chapter 21B "Solve a crime and fall in love at the same time?
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Comment from nomi338
It appears that the other shoe may be about to drop. All of a suddenly, things are heating up in a major way. Here is where you prove your mettle in the way this story progresses. I have every confidence that you will handle the next progression in a way that is both pleasing, exciting and totally plausible. I can hardly wait.
reply by the author on 29-Sep-2024
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It appears that the other shoe may be about to drop. All of a suddenly, things are heating up in a major way. Here is where you prove your mettle in the way this story progresses. I have every confidence that you will handle the next progression in a way that is both pleasing, exciting and totally plausible. I can hardly wait.
Comment Written 29-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 29-Sep-2024
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Thank you for the encouragement. I pray I don't let you down.
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At this stage of my fandom, that dear friend, is not very likely.
Comment from lancellot
Hmm, I think this is in keeping with you chosen style of writing and how romance between your characters functions, and your core fans will enjoy it like this. But I can't help but notice normal 'adults' wouldn't speak or act like this. Not saying you should have them stripping and cursing. But just slightly advance (in age) the way they speak and act.
And yes, your readers love it like this. And the FS readers always say they love it too. (they say that in reviews). But this is FanStory.
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reply by the author on 29-Sep-2024
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Hmm, I think this is in keeping with you chosen style of writing and how romance between your characters functions, and your core fans will enjoy it like this. But I can't help but notice normal 'adults' wouldn't speak or act like this. Not saying you should have them stripping and cursing. But just slightly advance (in age) the way they speak and act.
And yes, your readers love it like this. And the FS readers always say they love it too. (they say that in reviews). But this is FanStory.
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Comment Written 29-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 29-Sep-2024
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There is a market for Christian RomCom and it does well. Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from BethShelby
This is an exciting part of the book. I guess there is always danger when someone has been identified and they know they are dealing with someone trying to trap them.
He could be walking into a tramp." Did you mean trap here?
reply by the author on 29-Sep-2024
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This is an exciting part of the book. I guess there is always danger when someone has been identified and they know they are dealing with someone trying to trap them.
He could be walking into a tramp." Did you mean trap here?
Comment Written 29-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 29-Sep-2024
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Sure did. I have fixed that error. I appreciate the catch. Thank you for the encouragement.
Comment from Begin Again
Nice job, Barbara! I could definitely sense the tense between everyone and how they emotionally tried to handle the situation. And of course, the connection between Noah and Sami is heating up regardless of the rules.
Smiles, Carol
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reply by the author on 29-Sep-2024
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Nice job, Barbara! I could definitely sense the tense between everyone and how they emotionally tried to handle the situation. And of course, the connection between Noah and Sami is heating up regardless of the rules.
Smiles, Carol
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Comment Written 29-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 29-Sep-2024
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Thank you for the encouraging review.