Miranda Chronicles: Teacher's Pet
Viewing comments for Chapter 9 "Eye to Eye"Miranda finds herself in another situation.
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Comment from Sankey
This was another excellent read. You know I love your story-telling. Just one area in particular made me laugh. Liked this..."words were steamrolling towards the end of my tongue."
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2024
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This was another excellent read. You know I love your story-telling. Just one area in particular made me laugh. Liked this..."words were steamrolling towards the end of my tongue."
Comment Written 24-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2024
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Thank you so much, Sankey. I suffer from steamroller tongue at times. Lol. Gretchen
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
This is a tense scene with Miranda's anger building. Even though Mitch is potentially the most calming influence she could wish for, Miranda is still a loose cannon who could fire off at any time. As ever, Gretchen, all your characters are vividly portrayed here, building up your plot and creating an entertaining read. Thanks for sharing. Debbie
th(r)ough clenched teeth
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reply by the author on 24-Sep-2024
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This is a tense scene with Miranda's anger building. Even though Mitch is potentially the most calming influence she could wish for, Miranda is still a loose cannon who could fire off at any time. As ever, Gretchen, all your characters are vividly portrayed here, building up your plot and creating an entertaining read. Thanks for sharing. Debbie
th(r)ough clenched teeth
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Comment Written 24-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2024
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Thank you, Debbie. Miranda doesn't hold back, that's for sure. Gretchen
Comment from Esther Brown
You do have a way of ruffling feathers in your writing. I love it. I like people like Miranda. Strong minded, outspoken and passionate about what they believe, even if they make mistakes. Good job. Esther
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2024
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You do have a way of ruffling feathers in your writing. I love it. I like people like Miranda. Strong minded, outspoken and passionate about what they believe, even if they make mistakes. Good job. Esther
Comment Written 24-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2024
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She makes lots of mistakes but she's honest as the day is long. Thank you for this. Gretchen