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Viewing comments for Chapter 18 "Plan C - Rachelle's Version"Two very real women in not so real situation.
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Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
Oh noooooo the calvary is on the way! What will I do without the Amish adventures to look forward to! perhaps there will be some hook-ups at the FanStory convention. We can hope. :-)
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reply by the author on 25-Aug-2024
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Oh noooooo the calvary is on the way! What will I do without the Amish adventures to look forward to! perhaps there will be some hook-ups at the FanStory convention. We can hope. :-)
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Comment Written 25-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 25-Aug-2024
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Hahahaha!! Like, who are YOU hoping to hook up with, Marilyn? Let's start with that!! xoxo
Thanks for an adorable review. xoxo
Comment from Samantha Wymer
You write in first person very wonderfully because you can still describe the feelings and personalities of the characters. I can really see what is going on in the story. The way you write the dialogues with powerful words is beyond me. Alot of emotions there. You're an amazing writer.
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reply by the author on 25-Aug-2024
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You write in first person very wonderfully because you can still describe the feelings and personalities of the characters. I can really see what is going on in the story. The way you write the dialogues with powerful words is beyond me. Alot of emotions there. You're an amazing writer.
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Comment Written 25-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 25-Aug-2024
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And you're a sweet-talkin' reviewer! Thank you for this wonderful start to my day. xoxox
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Your welcome