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Comment from Wayne Fowler
This is a very nice chapter.
I've asked this before, but what sort of collaboration do you and Rachelle have? I mean, what if you broke Rachelle's leg but she runs around unbroken?
Best wishes.
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reply by the author on 11-Aug-2024
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This is a very nice chapter.
I've asked this before, but what sort of collaboration do you and Rachelle have? I mean, what if you broke Rachelle's leg but she runs around unbroken?
Best wishes.
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Comment Written 11-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2024
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I wait to write mine until she posts hers. We were messaging back and forth for the first few chapters, but this seems to be working. Thank you for this fun review. Gretchen