thoughts and feelings in poetry
Viewing comments for Chapter 54 "A stroll through the zoo"poems reflecting my thoughts and feelings
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Comment from RodG
A child would probably be delighted to seeing a monkey at the zoo on the loose. I commend the Speaker for heroically tackling it. But one wonders if it will escape again. A traditional rhyming poem like this one needs to have consistent meter. .
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reply by the author on 31-Jul-2024
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A child would probably be delighted to seeing a monkey at the zoo on the loose. I commend the Speaker for heroically tackling it. But one wonders if it will escape again. A traditional rhyming poem like this one needs to have consistent meter. .
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Comment Written 30-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2024
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Thank you for taking the time to review and comment I do appreciate it.
Comment from Teri7
This is a very well written poem about the monkey and the zoo. You used very good descriptive words with very good imagery from your words and art work you chose. blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2024
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This is a very well written poem about the monkey and the zoo. You used very good descriptive words with very good imagery from your words and art work you chose. blessings, Teri
Comment Written 30-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2024
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Thank you for taking the time to review and nice comment. I do appreciate it. I hope you have a great day.
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You are so welcome! Teri
Comment from patcelaw
This is very well written and it moves along very well when it is read aloud I wish you the very best with your day and I also wish you a very best when you go back to the zoo may you have a wonderful week and may God bless you. Patricia.
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reply by the author on 31-Jul-2024
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This is very well written and it moves along very well when it is read aloud I wish you the very best with your day and I also wish you a very best when you go back to the zoo may you have a wonderful week and may God bless you. Patricia.
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Comment Written 30-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2024
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Thank you for taking the time to review and kind words. I do appreciate it. God bless.