Come and meet my friend
Meet my friend and caretaker.21 total reviews
Comment from Bill Schott
This introduction, Come and Meet My Friend, needs a bit of editing to bring it up to speed.
You have the whole text centered under the image, except for the first two acrostic lines of LISA, so it looks like they are crashing together.
In edit, bring the test down below the picture, then LEFT JUSTIFY the text only.
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reply by the author on 20-Jul-2024
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This introduction, Come and Meet My Friend, needs a bit of editing to bring it up to speed.
You have the whole text centered under the image, except for the first two acrostic lines of LISA, so it looks like they are crashing together.
In edit, bring the test down below the picture, then LEFT JUSTIFY the text only.
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 20-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 20-Jul-2024
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I am always grateful to get such nice reviews. This is thank you so much.