Dancing Stars
a short verse27 total reviews
Comment from June Sargent
We've gone from the lazy days of summer back to quiet winter evenings. Really nice imagery captured here of dancing stars. Good one for the contest!
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2024
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We've gone from the lazy days of summer back to quiet winter evenings. Really nice imagery captured here of dancing stars. Good one for the contest!
Comment Written 16-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2024
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Hey June. I liked the idea of constellations sending their light to dance on snow... it was a fun thought. Sorry for my tardiness in responding. Hugs!!
Melissa
Comment from juliaSjames
We live in a magical universe and this poem reminds us that the "quiet ballet" of awesome beauty is constantly on stage if only we would open the eyes of our hearts.
I have seen these dancing stars, in television documentaries and in the sparkling ice crystals in my garden when the winter sun shines on freshly fallen snow.
Good luck in the contest with this finely crafted work of poetic art.
Blessings, Marilyn
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2024
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We live in a magical universe and this poem reminds us that the "quiet ballet" of awesome beauty is constantly on stage if only we would open the eyes of our hearts.
I have seen these dancing stars, in television documentaries and in the sparkling ice crystals in my garden when the winter sun shines on freshly fallen snow.
Good luck in the contest with this finely crafted work of poetic art.
Blessings, Marilyn
Comment Written 16-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2024
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Hey Marilyn. I liked the idea of constellations sending their light to dance on snow... it was a fun thought. Sorry for my tardiness in responding. Hugs!!
Melissa
Comment from royowen
Of course this sounds like the northern lights that frequent a lot of their iconic displays inside the arctic circle, this is a terrific entry in this three line contest, an excellent chance Melissa, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2024
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Of course this sounds like the northern lights that frequent a lot of their iconic displays inside the arctic circle, this is a terrific entry in this three line contest, an excellent chance Melissa, blessings Roy
Comment Written 16-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2024
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Hey Roy. I liked the idea of constellations sending their light to dance on snow... it was a fun thought. Sorry for my tardiness in responding. Hugs!!
Melissa
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That?s fine Melissa
Comment from Bill Schott
This 5-7-5, Dancing Stars, has the proper formatting and brings the readers' attention to those brilliant balls of light, which mean so much to the worlds they illuminate, and everything else to us.
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2024
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This 5-7-5, Dancing Stars, has the proper formatting and brings the readers' attention to those brilliant balls of light, which mean so much to the worlds they illuminate, and everything else to us.
Comment Written 16-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2024
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Hey Bill. I liked the idea of constellations sending their light to dance on snow... it was a fun thought. Sorry for my tardiness in responding. Hugs!!
Melissa
Comment from Jesse James Doty
My goodness. Have you seen stars dancing in the snow? It sounds unbelievable to me. I've never heard of such a thing. And a ballet dance at that. Hard to believe. Otherwise, this is a lovely 3 line poem.
Keep on keeping on.
Jesse
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2024
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My goodness. Have you seen stars dancing in the snow? It sounds unbelievable to me. I've never heard of such a thing. And a ballet dance at that. Hard to believe. Otherwise, this is a lovely 3 line poem.
Keep on keeping on.
Jesse
Comment Written 16-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2024
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Hello Jesse... thank you. I am delighted you enjoyed this poem and I apologize for my tardiness in responding. Hugs!
Melissa
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No need to apologize. Life gets in the way sometimes. Yes, I enjoyed your poem.
Take care, Jesse
Comment from BethShelby
You have a beautiful way of expressing these short poems in descriptive words which let the reader feel in awe of what they are seeing through your words.
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reply by the author on 26-Jun-2024
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You have a beautiful way of expressing these short poems in descriptive words which let the reader feel in awe of what they are seeing through your words.
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Comment Written 16-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2024
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Hello Beth... thank you. I am delighted you enjoyed this poem and I apologize for my tardiness in responding.
Melissa
Comment from Tom Horonzy
I must wonder... would a moonless night high in the Himalayas have sufficient light seeing much of the cloud base is BELOW Everest's peak what the scene would be like.
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reply by the author on 16-Jun-2024
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I must wonder... would a moonless night high in the Himalayas have sufficient light seeing much of the cloud base is BELOW Everest's peak what the scene would be like.
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Comment Written 16-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2024
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Oh Tom.... you nut... this is for your imagination, not the true facts of a Himalayan night scene. Thanks for the review.
Melissa
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I knew that but still I wonder how wonderful it would be on a cloudless night with a million flashlights beaming down unobstructed.
