Reviews from

Shaddap You Face!

it is what it is, solamente

30 total reviews 
Comment from royowen
Exceptional
This work has reached the exceptional level

I love cross cultural talk, I remember some French friends of ours, visiting Australia, could only speak French, but my wife also speaks French, our Australia friend spoke to the French couple in broken English with an accent, until we told her the French still couldn't understand her, it was hilarious, beautifully written Jim, blessings Roy
Typo : New (your) Mets sweatshirt. York?

 Comment Written 10-Jun-2024


reply by the author on 11-Jun-2024
    Thank you so much, good friend. You ought to write that up as a story!
reply by royowen on 12-Jun-2024
    I could be possible
Comment from Nicole Schmidt
Excellent
Not yet exceptional. When the exceptional rating is reached this is highlighted

His bride, Veronica, short, with frilly blonde hair and a New Your Mets sweatshirt, was by his side.

I like the imagery here. This is a good entry overall

 Comment Written 10-Jun-2024


reply by the author on 11-Jun-2024
    Many thanks!
Comment from bhogg
Excellent
Not yet exceptional. When the exceptional rating is reached this is highlighted

Thanks for bringing a smile my way. Not so many thanks for the recording which I can't seem to get out of my mind. Oh well, I'll just have to Shadup my face and live with it!

 Comment Written 10-Jun-2024


reply by the author on 11-Jun-2024
    Thank you! I am happy to deliver a smile to anyone's face!
Comment from lyenochka
Excellent
Not yet exceptional. When the exceptional rating is reached this is highlighted

Thanks for entering the this wacky museum challenge, Jim! I have to admit some of the accented speech humor went over my head. Was the "shoes" supposed to be "choose"?

I like that even though they went to the professor for help with speaking and their marriage, it turned out that Giuseppe was always talking because his mama didn't let him talk. That's cute! Marriage is saved!

But thanks for the song - it was something from my husband's childhood. ð???

 Comment Written 10-Jun-2024


reply by the author on 11-Jun-2024
    Actually, it was broken English Italian for "sure!" In the old days, vaudeville featured many ethnic comics. People didn't get offended as much back then. The managers ruled the roost and paid the performers. There was an old team that was told by the manager to cut their act short. (They were an Italian dialect act). So, they went on, one said, "Do you want to look for a new job?" The other said, "Shoes", and they walked offstage. The Manager couldn't complain. They did what he told them to do.
reply by lyenochka on 11-Jun-2024
    Lol. That's funny. I had no idea. I would think with an Italian accent, "Sure" with a rolled R, would be easier to say that shoes!
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2024
    I read that many years ago in a historical account of vaudeville times.
Comment from GoWiSt
Excellent
Not yet exceptional. When the exceptional rating is reached this is highlighted

"Shaddap You Face!" Sounds like something my obnoxious baby sister used to say.
"a New Your Mets sweatshirt," Did you mean New 'York' Mets?
You just gotta love the way non-English speaking immigrants/foreigners speak the language--adorable.
"He needs to learn some Connecticut" Now that is some highly specialized breed of English--never to be taken lightly.
Haha! A nicely humoous piece here.

 Comment Written 10-Jun-2024


reply by the author on 11-Jun-2024
    Thanks for your words and pointing out the typo. I appreciate you!
Comment from BethShelby
Excellent
Not yet exceptional. When the exceptional rating is reached this is highlighted

This was funny and I enjoyed, You did good with the Italian accents I did have to read in a couple of times because I've not been around that dialect very. Good writing.

 Comment Written 10-Jun-2024


reply by the author on 11-Jun-2024
    This probably would have worked better as an audio recording.
Comment from Iza Deleanu
Excellent
Not yet exceptional. When the exceptional rating is reached this is highlighted

Ha, Ha, Ha, Jim you made me laugh and I can hear that italian in the background:) ""My flittering leetle humeengbird, You are my amore! I ador-a the very sight of you."

"Well, eet sound like we've-a made progressione! Your problem-she ees solved, eez eet not?"

"Shoes."" Thank you for sharing and good luck with your writings

 Comment Written 10-Jun-2024


reply by the author on 11-Jun-2024
    Thank you so much for your very kind words!
Comment from jessizero
Excellent
Not yet exceptional. When the exceptional rating is reached this is highlighted

This short story was very funny! I had to read it carefully, but I'm glad I did. I really enjoyed it. Thank you so much for sharing, and best wishes to you.

 Comment Written 10-Jun-2024


reply by the author on 11-Jun-2024
    I wish I could have submitted it as an audio recording!
Comment from patcelaw
Excellent
Not yet exceptional. When the exceptional rating is reached this is highlighted

This was a very fun read, and I enjoyed it very much. I wish you the very best with all of your writing. I also enjoyed the video you put with it. It's wonderful. May you have a very good week and may God bless you. Patricia .

This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.

 Comment Written 10-Jun-2024


reply by the author on 10-Jun-2024
    Thank you very much!
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Excellent
Not yet exceptional. When the exceptional rating is reached this is highlighted

Thank you for sharing this club entry with us. I enjoyed reading. I couldn't help but smile as I read. You did a great job writing this. This is a good write.

This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.

 Comment Written 10-Jun-2024


reply by the author on 10-Jun-2024
    I appreciate your kind words.