Why Women Came To Be
A Ruse to Muse28 total reviews
Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
An excellent entry for the poem About a Woman contest. This was perfect. Very entertaining. Cute descriptions. Just a whole lot of demented fun! Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 21-May-2024
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An excellent entry for the poem About a Woman contest. This was perfect. Very entertaining. Cute descriptions. Just a whole lot of demented fun! Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 21-May-2024
reply by the author on 21-May-2024
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I go where the kind takes me regardless if a flood of adversity is coming downstream.
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I go where the kind takes me regardless if a flood of adversity is coming downstream.
Comment from evilynne
Hahaaa - very cute and flattering to us females (I think). And as usual we have Adam, who is quite horny. Well, why not, when Eve's walking around au natural. And that's the naked truth. Well written, fun reading. Best luck in the contest! Evi
reply by the author on 21-May-2024
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Hahaaa - very cute and flattering to us females (I think). And as usual we have Adam, who is quite horny. Well, why not, when Eve's walking around au natural. And that's the naked truth. Well written, fun reading. Best luck in the contest! Evi
Comment Written 21-May-2024
reply by the author on 21-May-2024
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Men are men and women are? different in the very best way au naturale or decked in satin and lace or even a gingham dress
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Men are men and women are? different in the very best way au naturale or decked in satin and lace or even a gingham dress
Comment from Douglas Goff
Had to give your interesting opinion/take a sixer.
The rhymes are perfectly placed and do not feel forced in or awkward.
Good stuff and great read.
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reply by the author on 21-May-2024
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Had to give your interesting opinion/take a sixer.
The rhymes are perfectly placed and do not feel forced in or awkward.
Good stuff and great read.
D
Comment Written 21-May-2024
reply by the author on 21-May-2024
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Thanks
Once upon all I wrote rhyme and the I turned to be a prose graduating into story-telling
I wonder what other forums I will find to write
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Thanks
Once upon all I wrote rhyme and the I turned to be a prose graduating into story-telling
I wonder what other forums I will find to write
Comment from Wayne Fowler
Good work. This is a very nice poem.
You have nothing to apologize for - except maybe the way you describe Eve, maybe Adam's 'thingamajig might not be quite so 'dangly'. (smiley face here)
reply by the author on 21-May-2024
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Good work. This is a very nice poem.
You have nothing to apologize for - except maybe the way you describe Eve, maybe Adam's 'thingamajig might not be quite so 'dangly'. (smiley face here)
Comment Written 21-May-2024
reply by the author on 21-May-2024
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Eve never complained so I think I am safe from flooding waters and evenNoah reserved me space for one of them fema
N a
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Eve never complained so I think I am safe from flooding waters and evenNoah reserved me space for one of them fema
N a
Comment from Begin Again
Good morning, Tom! You never cease to amaze me and the humor is always top notch. Though you do walk right on the edge of the wild side... please don't fall. But then, I suppose you would grab hold of one of the female gender and take her along for the ride. LOL
Smiles, Carol
reply by the author on 21-May-2024
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Good morning, Tom! You never cease to amaze me and the humor is always top notch. Though you do walk right on the edge of the wild side... please don't fall. But then, I suppose you would grab hold of one of the female gender and take her along for the ride. LOL
Smiles, Carol
Comment Written 21-May-2024
reply by the author on 21-May-2024
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Once upon a time I began to fall but was whisk back to sound ground where my frown turn into a smile and my rescuer wouldn?t let me go. Come Jun 2nd it will be 45 annums
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Once upon a time I began to fall but was whisk back to sound ground where my frown turn into a smile and my rescuer wouldn?t let me go. Come Jun 2nd it will be 45 annums
Comment from Bill Schott
This poem, Why Women Came to Be, allows that in God's plan for humanity, women are given to render the others under the control of someone with a clue.
reply by the author on 21-May-2024
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This poem, Why Women Came to Be, allows that in God's plan for humanity, women are given to render the others under the control of someone with a clue.
Comment Written 21-May-2024
reply by the author on 21-May-2024
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Unlike USA politics.
Thanks Bill
Glad you enjoyed it. (assuming you did)
Comment from Julie Helms
Well maybe if we all looked like the beauty in the photo, masterpiece would apply. But even decent watercolor or passable sketch would be ok. :-)
Your poem is a nice tribute to the female gender, with a fun interplay with words.
I can honestly say I have never read a poem that used the expression 'thingamajig dangled'....it's poetry in motion!
Nice job!
Julie
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reply by the author on 21-May-2024
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Well maybe if we all looked like the beauty in the photo, masterpiece would apply. But even decent watercolor or passable sketch would be ok. :-)
Your poem is a nice tribute to the female gender, with a fun interplay with words.
I can honestly say I have never read a poem that used the expression 'thingamajig dangled'....it's poetry in motion!
Nice job!
Julie
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Comment Written 21-May-2024
reply by the author on 21-May-2024
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Beauty is in the eye of the beholder, and besides, what would a blind person see? Sometimes, it isn't how a person looks but the joy they bring along their thingamigjig. :-O
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May I have permission to quote your phrase (with proper attribution) of 'thingamajig dangled'?
Your piece got me thinking of how fun it would be to do a creative exposé of the various cultural descriptions of the...thingamajig.
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Not only this but you are free to use whatever I post. I have no plans for publishing anything (a shame)
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Technically, posting on Fanstory IS publishing (that's why there's copyright info at the bottom of each page), it just doesn't come with great fortune and fame.
Thank you for the permission. You are a peach!
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a peach? Fuzzy perhaps but I consider myself an unripened persimmon.
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Better than sour grapes!
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
I thought this was great. Your poem celebrates the unique qualities of women in such a funny way. My favorite part is the playful comparison between Adam and Eve! This was such a unique and funny poem. Great job!
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reply by the author on 21-May-2024
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I thought this was great. Your poem celebrates the unique qualities of women in such a funny way. My favorite part is the playful comparison between Adam and Eve! This was such a unique and funny poem. Great job!
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Comment Written 21-May-2024
reply by the author on 21-May-2024
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Thank you, and now I can breathe a sigh of relief and leave the more important matters to Joe B and The Donald.