Willing Hearts
Viewing comments for Chapter 18 "Chapter 12 A"Solve a crime and fall in love at the same time?
34 total reviews
Comment from Wendy G
Another fine chapter and a well-written one. Noah's supports are very caring people, but I think both Noah and Sami will be safer if he keeps his own personal rules about mixing emotions with work. They have still only known each other for just over two weeks, so Sami needs to hold back a bit.
Wendy
reply by the author on 20-May-2024
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Another fine chapter and a well-written one. Noah's supports are very caring people, but I think both Noah and Sami will be safer if he keeps his own personal rules about mixing emotions with work. They have still only known each other for just over two weeks, so Sami needs to hold back a bit.
Wendy
Comment Written 19-May-2024
reply by the author on 20-May-2024
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I think they will too, but will love take over. Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from jim vecchio
You deserve such credit for writing this after all you've been through. It reminded me of my grad school teacher who completed a teleplay even though his father died. I could never do that, and I hope you never face more hardships and are able to enjoy more relaxation. Didn't notice any hiccups. You deserve a six.
reply by the author on 20-May-2024
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You deserve such credit for writing this after all you've been through. It reminded me of my grad school teacher who completed a teleplay even though his father died. I could never do that, and I hope you never face more hardships and are able to enjoy more relaxation. Didn't notice any hiccups. You deserve a six.
Comment Written 19-May-2024
reply by the author on 20-May-2024
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Thank you for the kind review.
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You always deserve it.
Comment from Ben Colder
Someone came in a whipped the scene with a AKC47 . It will do it. I think this is getting more interesting. I thought you were on vacation. Glad you posted. Good one, Barb.
reply by the author on 20-May-2024
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Someone came in a whipped the scene with a AKC47 . It will do it. I think this is getting more interesting. I thought you were on vacation. Glad you posted. Good one, Barb.
Comment Written 19-May-2024
reply by the author on 20-May-2024
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
The shooting really accentuates the danger that everyone's in and probably isn't the best time for Noah to consider slackening the rules with Sami. He's got a lot on his plate and conscience. Excellent pace with the story and perfect length to keep everything compact and focused. Well done, Barbara, on another excellent chapter! Debbie
reply by the author on 20-May-2024
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The shooting really accentuates the danger that everyone's in and probably isn't the best time for Noah to consider slackening the rules with Sami. He's got a lot on his plate and conscience. Excellent pace with the story and perfect length to keep everything compact and focused. Well done, Barbara, on another excellent chapter! Debbie
Comment Written 19-May-2024
reply by the author on 20-May-2024
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Thank you for the kind review. In a while, we'll discover exactly why Noah is so closed off.
Comment from jmdg1954
Barbara.
An excellent chapter as is your norm. I've been remiss on this book as I've been working crazy hours, and get inundated with posts to read.
I'm trying to get back on track. You're a good writer and I don't want yo miss out.
I apologize...
John
reply by the author on 20-May-2024
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Barbara.
An excellent chapter as is your norm. I've been remiss on this book as I've been working crazy hours, and get inundated with posts to read.
I'm trying to get back on track. You're a good writer and I don't want yo miss out.
I apologize...
John
Comment Written 19-May-2024
reply by the author on 20-May-2024
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Thank you for taking time to read this post. I really appreciate it. HUGS!!
Comment from Jacob1395
Another excellent piece, Barbara, I'm sorry I missed last weeks post but I've just read it and caught up. Your character's personalities continue to shine through on the page, it does seem that Noah and Sami do have a bit of a way to go yet before that spark between them is really ignited. I really enjoyed reading it.
reply by the author on 19-May-2024
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Another excellent piece, Barbara, I'm sorry I missed last weeks post but I've just read it and caught up. Your character's personalities continue to shine through on the page, it does seem that Noah and Sami do have a bit of a way to go yet before that spark between them is really ignited. I really enjoyed reading it.
Comment Written 19-May-2024
reply by the author on 19-May-2024
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Thank you for dropping by and leaving this kind review.
Comment from BethShelby
I was surprisred to see all those men get shot at the poker game. I'm wondering what is happening to all the girls that have been taken by force. It would seem so very bad things are probably happening that they might need a lot of help to get past. This sounds like an extremely dangerous job tying ot break up these men who are kidniapping the young girls.
reply by the author on 19-May-2024
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I was surprisred to see all those men get shot at the poker game. I'm wondering what is happening to all the girls that have been taken by force. It would seem so very bad things are probably happening that they might need a lot of help to get past. This sounds like an extremely dangerous job tying ot break up these men who are kidniapping the young girls.
Comment Written 19-May-2024
reply by the author on 19-May-2024
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It is very dangerous and unfortunately very real. Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from judiverse
I'm glad you've been enjoying yourself. You were dedicated to get something posted. Chen is out to do all the damage he can. At least Sean survived, and he may even get a vacation out of it. Probably right for Noah to stay away. Chen's people are all eyes. Good advice to keep away from the bars. I think Noah can handle the situation. Sami might not understand if she goes too far with the hugs and thinks he's rejecting her. Interesting that the team feels they can tell Noah what they think about what's going on. Great details about the hit. judi
reply by the author on 19-May-2024
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I'm glad you've been enjoying yourself. You were dedicated to get something posted. Chen is out to do all the damage he can. At least Sean survived, and he may even get a vacation out of it. Probably right for Noah to stay away. Chen's people are all eyes. Good advice to keep away from the bars. I think Noah can handle the situation. Sami might not understand if she goes too far with the hugs and thinks he's rejecting her. Interesting that the team feels they can tell Noah what they think about what's going on. Great details about the hit. judi
Comment Written 19-May-2024
reply by the author on 19-May-2024
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The team and Noah have worked together for a while and they're close. Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from judiverse
I'm glad you've been enjoying yourself. You were dedicated to get something posted. Chen is out to do all the damage he can. At least Sean survived, and he may even get a vacation out of it. Probably right for Noah to stay away. Chen's people are all eyes. Good advice to keep away from the bars. I think Noah can handle the situation. Sami might not understand if she goes too far with the hugs and thinks he's rejecting her. Interesting that the team feels they can tell Noah what they think about what's going on. Great details about the hit. judi
reply by the author on 19-May-2024
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I'm glad you've been enjoying yourself. You were dedicated to get something posted. Chen is out to do all the damage he can. At least Sean survived, and he may even get a vacation out of it. Probably right for Noah to stay away. Chen's people are all eyes. Good advice to keep away from the bars. I think Noah can handle the situation. Sami might not understand if she goes too far with the hugs and thinks he's rejecting her. Interesting that the team feels they can tell Noah what they think about what's going on. Great details about the hit. judi
Comment Written 19-May-2024
reply by the author on 19-May-2024
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The same review posted twice.
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Well, Tom does that all the time. judi
Comment from Sankey
Good to see you. Once again, a dramatic, drawing post. I am wondering how long it has taken you, to put this all together. Just one spag. (In your chapter heading)A hit was made again(st) part of Noah's team.
reply by the author on 19-May-2024
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Good to see you. Once again, a dramatic, drawing post. I am wondering how long it has taken you, to put this all together. Just one spag. (In your chapter heading)A hit was made again(st) part of Noah's team.
Comment Written 19-May-2024
reply by the author on 19-May-2024
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Thank you for the catch. I have made the correction. I appreciate your help and kind review.
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I still have a poem I started ages ago that needs completing.
