Panpipes
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Comment from Michael Ludwinder
Your writing does a wonderful job of capturing Ayesha's internal conflict. You could feel her emotions as she grapples with the revelation of Bruno's involvement in drug related activities and her own potential implication in his schemes. The use of introspection and dialogue added to her emotional turmoil and how I felt for her. I undertstood her predicament. The descriptions are terrific. Particularly of the beach and the night market. Well done!
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reply by the author on 16-May-2024
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Your writing does a wonderful job of capturing Ayesha's internal conflict. You could feel her emotions as she grapples with the revelation of Bruno's involvement in drug related activities and her own potential implication in his schemes. The use of introspection and dialogue added to her emotional turmoil and how I felt for her. I undertstood her predicament. The descriptions are terrific. Particularly of the beach and the night market. Well done!
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Comment Written 16-May-2024
reply by the author on 16-May-2024
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Thanks very much for your review, Michael. I appreciate your comments about the emotional impact, dialogue, and setting. I?m glad you?re enjoying the story. All the best, Tony.
Comment from Mrs. KT
Hello, Tony!
Once again, an exceptionally well-crafted chapter, rich in detail with smooth progression of action.
I am in awe of your attention to detail whether it is describing Ayesha's swim to the available entrees at the covered night market to the discussion of between Ayesha and Kamul at chapter's end.
Much enjoyed, Tony!
Thank you for sharing!
diane
reply by the author on 16-May-2024
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Hello, Tony!
Once again, an exceptionally well-crafted chapter, rich in detail with smooth progression of action.
I am in awe of your attention to detail whether it is describing Ayesha's swim to the available entrees at the covered night market to the discussion of between Ayesha and Kamul at chapter's end.
Much enjoyed, Tony!
Thank you for sharing!
diane
Comment Written 16-May-2024
reply by the author on 16-May-2024
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Thanks very much both for your review and the sixth star, Diane. I appreciate your continued support and lovely comments about the attention to detail. I?m delighted you?re still enjoying the story. All the best, Tony.
