Awareness
A poem29 total reviews
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
When a relationship has stopped working it is best for both parties to move on and be happy, I enjoyed your philosophy here Jesse. Your poem is uplifting, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2024
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When a relationship has stopped working it is best for both parties to move on and be happy, I enjoyed your philosophy here Jesse. Your poem is uplifting, love Dolly x
Comment Written 20-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2024
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Thanks, Dolly, for your kind words.
I am glad you liked my philosophy.
Take care,
Jesse
Comment from Mike Stevens
Another fine poem, Jesse....and yours is the right kind of attitude, in the same situation, I resort to groveling; hasn't served me well yet, but one of these times....
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2024
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Another fine poem, Jesse....and yours is the right kind of attitude, in the same situation, I resort to groveling; hasn't served me well yet, but one of these times....
Comment Written 20-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2024
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There is always time to learn new habits.
Thanks for this positive review. I hope you someday find someone who is worth the right kind of attitude. Then you will have peace of mind.
Take care, my friend.
Jesse
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Thank you, Jesse
Comment from Ulla
Yeah, I see where you're coming from, Jesse, and I like and admire your positive attitude to the whole thing. It's a loss, but life goes on.
It's a wonderful poem you've written. Ulla:)))
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reply by the author on 20-Apr-2024
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Yeah, I see where you're coming from, Jesse, and I like and admire your positive attitude to the whole thing. It's a loss, but life goes on.
It's a wonderful poem you've written. Ulla:)))
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Comment Written 20-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2024
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Thanks, Ulla, for your encouraging review.
Life goes on as it often does. New examples of kindness are just around the corner. Thanks for your kind words.
Jesse
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Nice artwork and presentation, Jesse.
-A well written poem as you reflect on
the nature of awareness and friendship.
-I agree with your second line that it
often can come with a cost.
-You do a good job showing the result:
standing out in the sunshine, not hiding in the shadows.
-A good comparison with awareness and meaningfulness.
-Even thought it is hard, it's necessary to move on.
-A good ending with the dolphins, one of our most peaceful creatures.
-Thanks for sharing it.
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2024
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-Nice artwork and presentation, Jesse.
-A well written poem as you reflect on
the nature of awareness and friendship.
-I agree with your second line that it
often can come with a cost.
-You do a good job showing the result:
standing out in the sunshine, not hiding in the shadows.
-A good comparison with awareness and meaningfulness.
-Even thought it is hard, it's necessary to move on.
-A good ending with the dolphins, one of our most peaceful creatures.
-Thanks for sharing it.
Comment Written 20-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2024
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Thank you, Pam, for your detailed and thoughtful review. As always, you covered all the bases and shared what you liked about my poem. I appreciate your kind words and reflections.
Thanks, my friend.
Jesse
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You are very welcome, Jesse, and I appreciate your reply.
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My pleasure.
Comment from karenina
This is an emotionally healthy way to view life's events. We can't move forward to new experiences until we release the past. This does not mean we dismiss it as unimportant. Someone can be forever in our hearts and yet move beyond our shores...
Very nice, Jesse.
Karenina
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2024
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This is an emotionally healthy way to view life's events. We can't move forward to new experiences until we release the past. This does not mean we dismiss it as unimportant. Someone can be forever in our hearts and yet move beyond our shores...
Very nice, Jesse.
Karenina
Comment Written 20-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2024
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Thank you for your insightful review.
Letting go is difficult but achievable.
David will always be in my heart.
It is time to move on and let go.
Jesse
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May your happiness multiply daily!
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Thanks, Karenina.
You are very kind.
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
It's important to let go and move on when a relationship has come to the end. It took me five years to let go of my exhusband after the divorce. It takes a lot of strength to let go.
Beautiful poem and message. I love the presentation. I like the metaphor of swimming with dolphins, such wonderful creatures.
Gypsy hugs
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2024
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It's important to let go and move on when a relationship has come to the end. It took me five years to let go of my exhusband after the divorce. It takes a lot of strength to let go.
Beautiful poem and message. I love the presentation. I like the metaphor of swimming with dolphins, such wonderful creatures.
Gypsy hugs
Comment Written 20-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2024
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Thanks for sharing, my friend. You reveal how difficult it is to let go and move on after a relationship is through. Dolphins are lovely creatures. Swimming with them would be a wonderful thing.
Thanks for the hugs.
Jesse
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Letting go is very difficult but knowing that person is in a better place helps. Also knowing that person is smiling down on us helps too. My mom is positive that Dad is with her every day, in some way. Thank you for sharing. You continue to be in my prayers.
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2024
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Letting go is very difficult but knowing that person is in a better place helps. Also knowing that person is smiling down on us helps too. My mom is positive that Dad is with her every day, in some way. Thank you for sharing. You continue to be in my prayers.
Comment Written 20-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2024
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Thanks, Barbara, for the insightful review. David lives with his son in a neighboring state and is happy where he is now. I have come to terms with this and am moving on.
Thank you for your continued prayers.
Jesse
Comment from Alexandra Trovato
There are a lot of nice dolphins out there. Good for you Jessie this is an excellent poem! I really enjoyed reading this. I think I will revisit the stars tomorrow and come up with a six. You paint a picture with words of someone that's realizing that meaningfulness is more important than anything else. Thank you for sharing this important poem.
Best wishes my Friend,
Alex :)
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reply by the author on 20-Apr-2024
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There are a lot of nice dolphins out there. Good for you Jessie this is an excellent poem! I really enjoyed reading this. I think I will revisit the stars tomorrow and come up with a six. You paint a picture with words of someone that's realizing that meaningfulness is more important than anything else. Thank you for sharing this important poem.
Best wishes my Friend,
Alex :)
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Comment Written 20-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2024
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Thanks, Alex, for your kind review.
I have realized meaningfulness is the key to being self-aware.
Have a great weekend.
Jesse
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Certainly, I understand that. Have a great weekend, too!
Alex
Comment from lyenochka
Letting go is hard. But to be self-aware in the process is a beautiful thing. It shows you are caring for your heart and soul and not making the separation about the pain of loss but about growth and acceptance of self.
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reply by the author on 20-Apr-2024
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Letting go is hard. But to be self-aware in the process is a beautiful thing. It shows you are caring for your heart and soul and not making the separation about the pain of loss but about growth and acceptance of self.
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Comment Written 20-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2024
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Right you are, Helen. You have hit the nail right on the head with your keen observations. Self-awareness is the key.
Thanks,
Jesse