I Wonder
A 5-7-5 Poem23 total reviews
Comment from Tom Horonzy
It would and has reflected itself "In a Bottle" as Jim Croce penned. We, men and women, have gone beyond the pale, and I dont know what that means, into the Outer Limits where humanity is no longer in control, but "Don't Worry; Be Happy" as Bobby McFerrin sang. Maybe two aspirins would help. "Devoted to You," from me and Olivia Newton John, may she rest in peace.
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reply by the author on 07-Apr-2024
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It would and has reflected itself "In a Bottle" as Jim Croce penned. We, men and women, have gone beyond the pale, and I dont know what that means, into the Outer Limits where humanity is no longer in control, but "Don't Worry; Be Happy" as Bobby McFerrin sang. Maybe two aspirins would help. "Devoted to You," from me and Olivia Newton John, may she rest in peace.
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Comment Written 07-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2024
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Thank you, Tom, for your inspirational comments, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from Mark Jackson
That takes just a little contemplation to understand and I think that is what you are asking for. We cannot alter the path of mankind; but if each individual has a think before acting mankind's journey will be a smoother one.
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reply by the author on 07-Apr-2024
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That takes just a little contemplation to understand and I think that is what you are asking for. We cannot alter the path of mankind; but if each individual has a think before acting mankind's journey will be a smoother one.
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Comment Written 07-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2024
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yes, a bit of thought before acting, thank you for your understanding comments, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
You make a wonderful point here and it seems we have learned only how to destroy our planet and not save it, I loved the philosophy in your words here, love Dolly x x x
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2024
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You make a wonderful point here and it seems we have learned only how to destroy our planet and not save it, I loved the philosophy in your words here, love Dolly x x x
Comment Written 07-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2024
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Thank you so very much for your exceptional review and six stars, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
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You are most welcome x