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Cat at Work

The paw and natural law

48 total reviews 
Comment from QC Poet
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What a funny 1-6-1 poem entry conforming with a great accompanying picture of a fat happy cat to enhance your poetic entry Good Luck in this contest you have a wonderful chance of winning

 Comment Written 06-Apr-2024


reply by the author on 06-Apr-2024
    Thank you so much for taking the time to both Read and Review "Cat at Work". I appreciate very much the encouraging words and the five beautiful stars.
Comment from Colorado Owl
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I liked your poem, even though I'm not a fan of cats. You did a very good job of fitting your idea into the constrained form of this contest. Good luck!

 Comment Written 06-Apr-2024


reply by the author on 06-Apr-2024
    Thank you so much for reading, and reviewing: "Cat at Work." I appreciate so much those five lovely stars you gave me.
Comment from karenina
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I think my favorite is your "and life goes on" comment. These 1-6-1 contests are deceptively difficult! Yay for your beginning, middle and end!

Clever!

Karenina

 Comment Written 06-Apr-2024


reply by the author on 06-Apr-2024
    Thank you so much for reading, and reviewing: "Cat at Work." I appreciate so much those five lovely stars you gave me.
reply by karenina on 06-Apr-2024
    My pleasure!
Comment from Wendy G
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Yes, I guess that is the life cycle of nature. I hope the cat doesn't lick its owner straight after eating! Well illustrated. Best wishes for your entry.
Wendy

 Comment Written 06-Apr-2024


reply by the author on 06-Apr-2024
    Thank you so much for reading, and reviewing: "Cat at Work." I appreciate so much those five lovely stars you gave me.
    I agree with you, I hope it doesn?t.
Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
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An excellent entry for the 1-6-1 Poem Writing Prompt. Clever usage of your three rhyming words. This particular format is harder than it looks. The artwork is perfect for the poem as well. Good luck.

 Comment Written 05-Apr-2024


reply by the author on 06-Apr-2024
    Thank you so much for reading, and reviewing: "Cat at Work." I appreciate so much those five lovely stars you gave me.
Comment from lyenochka
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Now that is a great mouser and she/he won't stay fat long if the hunt goes on. Great job with the rhymes and meeting the requirements of this form! Best wishes in the contest!

 Comment Written 05-Apr-2024


reply by the author on 06-Apr-2024
    Thank you so much for reading, and reviewing: "Cat at Work." I appreciate so much those five lovely stars you gave me.
Comment from Teri7
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This is a very well written 1-6-1 poem you have penned for the writing prompt contest. You used very good descriptive words and very good imagery from the artwork you chose. Best wishes in the contest. Teri

 Comment Written 05-Apr-2024


reply by the author on 06-Apr-2024
    Thank you so much for reading, and reviewing: "Cat at Work." I appreciate so much those five lovely stars you gave me.
reply by Teri7 on 06-Apr-2024
    You are so very welcome!
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2024
    :-)
reply by Teri7 on 06-Apr-2024
    😊
Comment from Douglas Goff
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Okay, well that is just disgusting ... ha! You Hoyt your rhymes with the nasty version of circle-of-life.

Good fun and good luck in your contest, although I think that the devilishly handsome guy may win. Just sayin...

 Comment Written 05-Apr-2024


reply by the author on 06-Apr-2024
    Thank you so much for reading, and reviewing: "Cat at Work." I appreciate so much those five lovely stars you gave me.
Comment from Brenda Strauser
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What an interesting poem. The picture matches your words well. One time, my outside cat ate a chipmonk and left its head there. It was pretty gross. Tha's what they do. Very good job on this.

 Comment Written 05-Apr-2024


reply by the author on 06-Apr-2024
    Thank you so much for reading, and reviewing: "Cat at Work." I appreciate so much those five lovely stars you gave me.
Comment from mermaids
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You have a creative use of words. I am owned by two cats but like the cat in your words, I doubt they would even chase a rat. They prefer Fancy Feast in a can. Excellent 1-6-1 poem that creates a clear picture.

 Comment Written 05-Apr-2024


reply by the author on 06-Apr-2024
    Thank you so much for reading, and reviewing: "Cat at Work." I appreciate so much those five lovely stars you gave me. (I believe I would prefer fancy feast in a can.)