Comment from Marilyn Hamilton

Excellent

This is a beautiful example of a Mirror Cinquain poem. Like a moth to a flame, we are to our passions. We can't escape the attraction and it will be the end of us. The artwork adds to the presentation. Lovely work. Good luck.

 Comment Written 27-Mar-2024

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Comment from patcelaw

Excellent

Very well written mirror, poems for the club event. I wish you the very best with all of your writing. I also wish you a very pleasant day. Have a very happy Easter and may God bless you. Patricia .

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 Comment Written 27-Mar-2024

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Comment from Michael Ludwinder

Excellent

I thought this was a beautiful poem. The imagery of being hypnotized and flitting around the flame was powerful. For me your poem seems to be about succumbing to temptation which I thought was very powerful. Great job!

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