Panpipes
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Comment from Michael Ludwinder
I thought you did an excellent job of building the tension and suspense in this chapter. Your writing kept me completely engrossed from beginning to end. The tension with Ayesha, Steve, and their pursuers was well written. The arrival of the police was a pleasant surprise! This was very enjoyable to read.
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reply by the author on 24-Mar-2024
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I thought you did an excellent job of building the tension and suspense in this chapter. Your writing kept me completely engrossed from beginning to end. The tension with Ayesha, Steve, and their pursuers was well written. The arrival of the police was a pleasant surprise! This was very enjoyable to read.
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Comment Written 24-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2024
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Many thanks for your continued support and kind words, Michael. Best wishes, Tony
Comment from Mrs. KT
Good morning, Tony!
Well, this chapter certainly got my adrenaline pumping! Very fine action and an exceptional narrative of events and reactions by your characters.
240,00 per hour? Whew! Now that is a fair sum; I missed my calling!
One small nit: Day Street police station, (Police Station)
Exceptionally well-crafted and much enjoyed.
Thank you for sharing!
diane
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2024
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Good morning, Tony!
Well, this chapter certainly got my adrenaline pumping! Very fine action and an exceptional narrative of events and reactions by your characters.
240,00 per hour? Whew! Now that is a fair sum; I missed my calling!
One small nit: Day Street police station, (Police Station)
Exceptionally well-crafted and much enjoyed.
Thank you for sharing!
diane
Comment Written 24-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2024
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Many thanks for your continued support and kind words, Diane. Australian dollars, of course - but even so ...
I appreciate the catch. Now fixed.
Best wishes, Tony
Comment from royowen
Whst an exciting chapter, poor Dave's lack of experience to dirty tricks, render him senseless, however Steve is caught by fast reaction policemen, but Jimmy is loose, but ever the fast acting has made good her escaped...or has she? Well.done tony, great writing, blessings Roy
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reply by the author on 24-Mar-2024
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Whst an exciting chapter, poor Dave's lack of experience to dirty tricks, render him senseless, however Steve is caught by fast reaction policemen, but Jimmy is loose, but ever the fast acting has made good her escaped...or has she? Well.done tony, great writing, blessings Roy
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Comment Written 24-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2024
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Many thanks for your continued support and kind words, Roy. Best wishes, Tony
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Most welcome Tony
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
Oh, Steve has really dropped himself in it now. I hope the police will believe him when he explains. But Ayesha is on her own now, she really needs to get to the police station. She'll be able to vouch for Steve as well and back-up his story. I can't wait to read on. Well done!! Warmest hugs, Sandra xx
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2024
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Oh, Steve has really dropped himself in it now. I hope the police will believe him when he explains. But Ayesha is on her own now, she really needs to get to the police station. She'll be able to vouch for Steve as well and back-up his story. I can't wait to read on. Well done!! Warmest hugs, Sandra xx
Comment Written 24-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2024
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Many thanks for your continued support, Sandra, and for the sixth star. Best wishes, Tony
