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Butterfly

10-7-6 Busso poem

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Comment from patcelaw
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This is a very nice porn written in this format and I enjoyed reading it very much. You have presented it beautifully on the page. I wish you the very best for the weekend and may God bless you. Patricia .

 Comment Written 14-Mar-2024

reply by the author on 18-Mar-2024
    Thank you very much.
Comment from Raul1
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The sentences flow with clarity. It's beautifully written. I have enjoyed reading your piece of poetry. Excellent work! No mistakes found. Nice. Thank you for sharing!

 Comment Written 14-Mar-2024

reply by the author on 18-Mar-2024
    Thank you very much.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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I see many of these butterflies in the summer, they are big and colourful and really delightful. I think we are blessed to see them, a fine presentation, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 14-Mar-2024

reply by the author on 18-Mar-2024
    Thank you very much.
Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
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A beautiful poem in the Busso format. A descriptive portrait drawn using so few words. The picture you chose to accompany it, as well as the background and font colors add to the over all vision. Thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 14-Mar-2024

reply by the author on 18-Mar-2024
    Thank you very much
Comment from Begin Again
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Butterflies of all kinds are beautiful and so graceful with their fluttering wings. They hold a very special place in my heart. We are blessed by God's nature.
Hugs, Carol

 Comment Written 14-Mar-2024

reply by the author on 18-Mar-2024
    Thank you very much.
Comment from barbara.wilkey
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Thank you for sharing this club entry with us. I enjoyed reading and agree. God does some of His best artwork on critters in nature. We are so blessed with their beauty.

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 Comment Written 14-Mar-2024

reply by the author on 14-Mar-2024
    Thank youvery much.
Comment from lyenochka
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God's artwork is visible everywhere and we can be blessed by seeing by seeing the artwork on the wings of a butterfly.

Suggestions:
The picture is of a swallowtail butterfly. It would be a fun pun if you used a monarch butterfly picture.
you're the blessed one (this can be 4 or 5 syllables. Should it have six?)


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 Comment Written 14-Mar-2024

reply by the author on 14-Mar-2024
    I made it 'you are' now it issix. I could not get a picture of a monarch butterfly.IThank you Helen .I will search once again for Monarch
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2024
    I got a picture but it is not bery dramatic...okay
reply by lyenochka on 14-Mar-2024
    It's pretty!
    By the way, I spell it as ethereal. Is it different in British English?
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2024
    You are right .i have corrected it .Thanks a lot Helen.
reply by lyenochka on 14-Mar-2024
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