Comment from Karen Cherry Threadgill

Excellent

You certainly keep things hopping. This is being driven in the fast lane. There is a lot of information you are giving us. You need to slow down on the information download, we cannot absorb the information at this speed. MOHO ( My own humble opinion) Karen

 Comment Written 13-Mar-2024

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reply by the author on 13-Mar-2024

Thanks, Karen. I appreciate your continued encouragement and the tip about information overload. Best wishes, Tony

Comment from Jesse James Doty

Excellent

I'm impressed! This thriller reads easily with a font size that is easy on the eyes and I appreciate you filling me in on the storyline up until now. The dialogue is done well with an accent in the British tongue which suits the story. You take the time to bring us up to speed if we haven't kept up to now on what is going on and I so appreciate that.
Thanks for showing how it is done with a professional touch of class.
Jesse



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 Comment Written 13-Mar-2024

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reply by the author on 13-Mar-2024

Thanks for these encouraging remarks, Jesse. Always appreciated. All good wishes, Tony

reply by Jesse James Doty on 13-Mar-2024

You're welcome, Tony.
Best wishes to you too.
Jesse

Comment from Wayne Fowler

Excellent

High finance is not easy. Hope Ayesha learns and accepts that selling all the securities would be a terrible idea.
This chapter is well written. Good work.

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 Comment Written 13-Mar-2024

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reply by the author on 13-Mar-2024

Thanks, Wayne. I appreciate your continued interest and support. All good wishes, Tony.