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Our fostering journey with a severely disabled boy
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Debbie D'Arcy
The photo is excellent and perfectly (from your descriptions) depicts the slop he was being given. So much energy from you going into simply ensuring that Jonathan had the basic requirement of enjoyable food! The battle and your need to gather as much evidence as possible seems to be endless. But the way your story is so cleverly constructed, I would guess that Luca might, at last, come into his own:) I hope so, Wendy, because you certainly could do with some back-up. Thank you for sharing this amazing story of love and endurance in the face of adversity. Debbie x
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Comment Written 12-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2024
Thank you very much Debbie. A very perceptive and astute review. I always appreciate your insights.
Wendy
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